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::*[[File:Symbol possible vote.svg|16px]] Neither the article nor the source make any mention of Djawoto seeking political asylum, simply that he was granted it. Also, I've read the article's final sentence, {{tq|Albeit not a communist cadre, Djawoto has not allowed to return to Indonesia.}}, more than once without understanding what it's getting at: the first clause makes no sense in context, and both clauses have grammatical problems. [[User:BlueMoonset|BlueMoonset]] ([[User talk:BlueMoonset|talk]]) 01:52, 18 May 2014 (UTC)  
 
::*[[File:Symbol possible vote.svg|16px]] Neither the article nor the source make any mention of Djawoto seeking political asylum, simply that he was granted it. Also, I've read the article's final sentence, {{tq|Albeit not a communist cadre, Djawoto has not allowed to return to Indonesia.}}, more than once without understanding what it's getting at: the first clause makes no sense in context, and both clauses have grammatical problems. [[User:BlueMoonset|BlueMoonset]] ([[User talk:BlueMoonset|talk]]) 01:52, 18 May 2014 (UTC)  
 
:::*For me it's ok to switch 'sought' for 'was granted' in the hook. As per the last sentence, it was a typo, now corrected. --[[User:Soman|Soman]] ([[User talk:Soman|talk]]) 07:26, 20 May 2014 (UTC)
 
:::*For me it's ok to switch 'sought' for 'was granted' in the hook. As per the last sentence, it was a typo, now corrected. --[[User:Soman|Soman]] ([[User talk:Soman|talk]]) 07:26, 20 May 2014 (UTC)
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::::*As an individual cannot be a cadre, the last sentence still makes no sense. I've removed the first clause. However, what remains needs context: did he ask to return? When was he refused permission and by whom (or was it the government as a whole)? [[User:BlueMoonset|BlueMoonset]] ([[User talk:BlueMoonset|talk]]) 14:34, 22 May 2014 (UTC)
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Revision as of 14:34, 22 May 2014

Djawoto

Djawoto

  • ... that in 1966 the Indonesian ambassador Djawoto (pictured) sought political asylum in China?

Created by Soman (talk). Self nominated at 19:23, 13 May 2014 (UTC).

  • *Symbol confirmed.svg Sufficient prose length; hook under 200 characters; appears neutral; reliable seeming sources and hook cited (and specifically checked for verifiability); spot check found no infringement; created within the past five days. In short, ready to go!--Fuhghettaboutit (talk) 04:46, 16 May 2014 (UTC)
  • Symbol possible vote.svg Neither the article nor the source make any mention of Djawoto seeking political asylum, simply that he was granted it. Also, I've read the article's final sentence, Template:Tq, more than once without understanding what it's getting at: the first clause makes no sense in context, and both clauses have grammatical problems. BlueMoonset (talk) 01:52, 18 May 2014 (UTC)
  • For me it's ok to switch 'sought' for 'was granted' in the hook. As per the last sentence, it was a typo, now corrected. --Soman (talk) 07:26, 20 May 2014 (UTC)
  • As an individual cannot be a cadre, the last sentence still makes no sense. I've removed the first clause. However, what remains needs context: did he ask to return? When was he refused permission and by whom (or was it the government as a whole)? BlueMoonset (talk) 14:34, 22 May 2014 (UTC)