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::*[[File:Symbol confirmed.svg|16px]] New enough, long enough. I remove some words that were too close to the original; I did not see more. Hope you get lots of hits. This is Meghan's first DYK, so no review is required. [[User:Drmies|Drmies]] ([[User talk:Drmies|talk]]) 03:12, 27 August 2013 (UTC) | ::*[[File:Symbol confirmed.svg|16px]] New enough, long enough. I remove some words that were too close to the original; I did not see more. Hope you get lots of hits. This is Meghan's first DYK, so no review is required. [[User:Drmies|Drmies]] ([[User talk:Drmies|talk]]) 03:12, 27 August 2013 (UTC) | ||
*Looks like there's still a few instances of wording too close to the sources: compare for example the first paragraph of Teaching to [http://www.au.af.mil/au/goe/eagle_bios/1990/strother_1990.asp this source] - the order of the sentences is different, but their presentation is very similar. [[User:Nikkimaria|Nikkimaria]] ([[User talk:Nikkimaria|talk]]) 01:04, 2 September 2013 (UTC) | *Looks like there's still a few instances of wording too close to the sources: compare for example the first paragraph of Teaching to [http://www.au.af.mil/au/goe/eagle_bios/1990/strother_1990.asp this source] - the order of the sentences is different, but their presentation is very similar. [[User:Nikkimaria|Nikkimaria]] ([[User talk:Nikkimaria|talk]]) 01:04, 2 September 2013 (UTC) | ||
| − | ::*Thank you for reviewing & suggesting changes - I have | + | ::*Thank you for reviewing & suggesting changes - I have addressed the wording issue and suggest an ALT hook below, as well. |
| − | + | ::*'''ALT 1''': ... that [[Women Airforce Service Pilots| WASP]] pilot Dr. '''[[Dora Dougherty Strother]]''' was one of two women selected to train and fly the [[B-29 Superfortress]] in 1944 in order to prove it was safe for men to fly?--[[User:Meghaninmotion|Meghaninmotion]] ([[User talk:Meghaninmotion|talk]]) 14:40, 6 September 2013 (UTC) | |
| − | ::*'''ALT 1''': ... that [[Women Airforce Service Pilots| WASP]] pilot Dr. '''[[Dora Dougherty Strother]]''' was one of two women selected to train and fly the [[B-29 Superfortress]] in 1944 in order to prove it was safe for men to fly?--[[User:Meghaninmotion|Meghaninmotion]] ([[User talk:Meghaninmotion|talk]]) | ||
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Dora Dougherty Strother
- ... that WASP pilot Dr. Dora Dougherty Strother held simultaneous helicopter flight records for altitude and distance from 1961 to 1966?
Created by Meghaninmotion (talk). Self nominated at 13:55, 26 August 2013 (UTC).
- Looks like there's still a few instances of wording too close to the sources: compare for example the first paragraph of Teaching to this source - the order of the sentences is different, but their presentation is very similar. Nikkimaria (talk) 01:04, 2 September 2013 (UTC)
- Thank you for reviewing & suggesting changes - I have addressed the wording issue and suggest an ALT hook below, as well.
- ALT 1: ... that WASP pilot Dr. Dora Dougherty Strother was one of two women selected to train and fly the B-29 Superfortress in 1944 in order to prove it was safe for men to fly?--Meghaninmotion (talk) 14:40, 6 September 2013 (UTC)
