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:* Article created and DYK nominated on the same day, 22 May. So falls within 7 day range. QPQ done. Hook length is less than 200 characters. Readable prose is above 1500 characters. I have added web URL for the source books.
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:*Both the references do not support "After having to briefly leave the army to recover from an illness – most likely malaria" from first para. Let me know if I am missing anything here. "Rapid Response" need not be in caps as the term used in the source is "the creation in 1866 of the rapid response cholera interdiction teams". Rest of the article looks good. - [[User:Vivvt|<span style="color:#808080;font-size:15px;font-family:'Georgia, serif';font-style: italic;font-weight: bold;">Vivvt</span>]] ([[User talk:Vivvt|<span style="color:#000;font-size:10px;font-weight: bold;">Talk</span>]]) 09:27, 23 May 2017 (UTC)
  
 
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Edward Dalton

Created by Nikkimaria (talk). Self-nominated at 15:12, 22 May 2017 (UTC).

  • Article created and DYK nominated on the same day, 22 May. So falls within 7 day range. QPQ done. Hook length is less than 200 characters. Readable prose is above 1500 characters. I have added web URL for the source books.
  • Both the references do not support "After having to briefly leave the army to recover from an illness – most likely malaria" from first para. Let me know if I am missing anything here. "Rapid Response" need not be in caps as the term used in the source is "the creation in 1866 of the rapid response cholera interdiction teams". Rest of the article looks good. - Vivvt (Talk) 09:27, 23 May 2017 (UTC)