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| − | {{*mp}}... that | + | {{*mp}}... that some music critics believed [[Selena]] was noting [[Diana Ross]] and [[Leslie Gore]] in the song "Missing My Baby", which was featured on '''''[[Entre a Mi Mundo]]'''''? |
| − | *or '''ALT1''': ... that production of '''''[[Entre a Mi Mundo]]''''' was postponed because [[Selena]]'s father and manager [[Abraham Quintanilla Jr.]] was threatening to disband [[Selena y Los Dinos]] because Selena liked the [[Chris Perez|guitarist]] of the group? | + | *or <s>'''ALT1''': ... that production of '''''[[Entre a Mi Mundo]]''''' was postponed because [[Selena]]'s father and manager [[Abraham Quintanilla Jr.]] was threatening to disband [[Selena y Los Dinos]] because Selena liked the [[Chris Perez|guitarist]] of the group?</s> |
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| − | :* | + | :*With 2 ''because''s, ALT1 is very difficult to understand. --[[Special:Contributions/69.157.46.38|69.157.46.38]] ([[User talk:69.157.46.38|talk]]) 10:30, 8 December 2011 (UTC) |
| + | ::*[[File:Pictogram voting keep.svg|16px]] Length and expansion both meet criteria, and the date also checks out. I agree with the IP user above that ALT1 is too wordy and unclear, so I am reviewing the original hook. Hook referenced offline: AGF. Majority of references are offline or foreign language, but checks on those that I could access reveal no evidence of close paraphrasing. Good to go. '''[[User:Harrias|<font color="#00cc33">Harrias</font>]]''' <sup>[[User_talk:Harrias|<font color="#009900">talk</font>]]</sup> 12:46, 10 December 2011 (UTC) | ||
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Revision as of 12:46, 10 December 2011
Entre a Mi Mundo
- ... that some music critics believed Selena was noting Diana Ross and Leslie Gore in the song "Missing My Baby", which was featured on Entre a Mi Mundo?
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ALT1: ... that production of Entre a Mi Mundo was postponed because Selena's father and manager Abraham Quintanilla Jr. was threatening to disband Selena y Los Dinos because Selena liked the guitarist of the group?
Created/expanded by AJona1992 (talk). Self nom at 15:59, 20 November 2011 (UTC)
- With 2 becauses, ALT1 is very difficult to understand. --69.157.46.38 (talk) 10:30, 8 December 2011 (UTC)
Length and expansion both meet criteria, and the date also checks out. I agree with the IP user above that ALT1 is too wordy and unclear, so I am reviewing the original hook. Hook referenced offline: AGF. Majority of references are offline or foreign language, but checks on those that I could access reveal no evidence of close paraphrasing. Good to go. Harrias talk 12:46, 10 December 2011 (UTC)