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{{*mp}}... that many music critics believed [[Selena]] was noting [[Diana Ross]] and [[Leslie Gore]] in the song "Missing My Baby", which was featured on '''''[[Entre a Mi Mundo]]'''''?
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{{*mp}}... that some music critics believed [[Selena]] was noting [[Diana Ross]] and [[Leslie Gore]] in the song "Missing My Baby", which was featured on '''''[[Entre a Mi Mundo]]'''''?
*or '''ALT1''': ... that production of '''''[[Entre a Mi Mundo]]''''' was postponed because [[Selena]]'s father and manager [[Abraham Quintanilla Jr.]] was threatening to disband [[Selena y Los Dinos]] because Selena liked the [[Chris Perez|guitarist]] of the group?
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*or <s>'''ALT1''': ... that production of '''''[[Entre a Mi Mundo]]''''' was postponed because [[Selena]]'s father and manager [[Abraham Quintanilla Jr.]] was threatening to disband [[Selena y Los Dinos]] because Selena liked the [[Chris Perez|guitarist]] of the group?</s>
 
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:*<!--Make first comment here--> With 2 ''because''s, ALT1 is very difficult to understand. --[[Special:Contributions/69.157.46.38|69.157.46.38]] ([[User talk:69.157.46.38|talk]]) 10:30, 8 December 2011 (UTC)
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:*With 2 ''because''s, ALT1 is very difficult to understand. --[[Special:Contributions/69.157.46.38|69.157.46.38]] ([[User talk:69.157.46.38|talk]]) 10:30, 8 December 2011 (UTC)
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::*[[File:Pictogram voting keep.svg|16px]] Length and expansion both meet criteria, and the date also checks out. I agree with the IP user above that ALT1 is too wordy and unclear, so I am reviewing the original hook. Hook referenced offline: AGF. Majority of references are offline or foreign language, but checks on those that I could access reveal no evidence of close paraphrasing. Good to go. '''[[User:Harrias|<font color="#00cc33">Harrias</font>]]''' <sup>[[User_talk:Harrias|<font color="#009900">talk</font>]]</sup> 12:46, 10 December 2011 (UTC)
  
  
 
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Revision as of 12:46, 10 December 2011

Entre a Mi Mundo

Created/expanded by AJona1992 (talk). Self nom at 15:59, 20 November 2011 (UTC)

  • With 2 becauses, ALT1 is very difficult to understand. --69.157.46.38 (talk) 10:30, 8 December 2011 (UTC)
  • Pictogram voting keep.svg Length and expansion both meet criteria, and the date also checks out. I agree with the IP user above that ALT1 is too wordy and unclear, so I am reviewing the original hook. Hook referenced offline: AGF. Majority of references are offline or foreign language, but checks on those that I could access reveal no evidence of close paraphrasing. Good to go. Harrias talk 12:46, 10 December 2011 (UTC)