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:'''ALT3'''... that following his research for '''''[[Epidemiology in Country Practice]]''''', [[William Pickles]] observed that "studies in epidemiology sometimes reveal romances"? [[User:Philafrenzy|Philafrenzy]] ([[User talk:Philafrenzy|talk]]) 08:55, 23 May 2018 (UTC)
 
:'''ALT3'''... that following his research for '''''[[Epidemiology in Country Practice]]''''', [[William Pickles]] observed that "studies in epidemiology sometimes reveal romances"? [[User:Philafrenzy|Philafrenzy]] ([[User talk:Philafrenzy|talk]]) 08:55, 23 May 2018 (UTC)
 
:: [[File:Symbol confirmed.svg|16px]] Okay – both of those work. [[User:Hameltion|Hameltion]] ([[User talk:Hameltion|talk]], [[Special:Contributions/Hameltion|contribs]]) 12:03, 23 May 2018 (UTC)
 
:: [[File:Symbol confirmed.svg|16px]] Okay – both of those work. [[User:Hameltion|Hameltion]] ([[User talk:Hameltion|talk]], [[Special:Contributions/Hameltion|contribs]]) 12:03, 23 May 2018 (UTC)
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::: Thanks both. '''ALT3''' is better and most accurate. [[User:Whispyhistory|Whispyhistory]] ([[User talk:Whispyhistory|talk]]) 12:21, 23 May 2018 (UTC)
  
 
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Revision as of 12:23, 23 May 2018

Epidemiology in Country Practice

Changed helps to helped for the sake of the hook.

Created by Whispyhistory (talk) and Philafrenzy (talk). Nominated by Philafrenzy (talk) at 18:15, 5 May 2018 (UTC).

  • Symbol question.svg New enough, long enough, neutral, no copyvio. Made some copyedits. I ask for an alternate hook, please, because the current (ALT0) one is a little difficult to interpret without having read the text in the article. QPQ done. Hameltion (talk, contribs) 02:23, 17 May 2018 (UTC)

* ALT1... that William Pickles's research for Epidemiology in Country Practice traced 13 cases of jaundice to a country maid and a man who went "in the back door in the evenings, and helped her wash up"?

  • Symbol confirmed.svg Great! Good to go with a preference for ALT1. Hameltion (talk) 23:42, 20 May 2018 (UTC)
  • Thanks Template:Ping Sorry to trouble you again, but on reflection I think those hooks are just too hard to understand. How about:
ALT2... that William Pickles's research for Epidemiology in Country Practice traced 13 cases of jaundice to a country girl who was determined to attend a fête while infected with the disease?
ALT3... that following his research for Epidemiology in Country Practice, William Pickles observed that "studies in epidemiology sometimes reveal romances"? Philafrenzy (talk) 08:55, 23 May 2018 (UTC)
Symbol confirmed.svg Okay – both of those work. Hameltion (talk, contribs) 12:03, 23 May 2018 (UTC)
Thanks both. ALT3 is better and most accurate. Whispyhistory (talk) 12:21, 23 May 2018 (UTC)