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The result was: '''promoted''' by [[User:Cwmhiraeth|Cwmhiraeth]] ([[User talk:Cwmhiraeth|talk]])&nbsp;06:08, 5 May 2020 (UTC)<br />
 
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* ... <s> that '''[[Erin Phillips]]''' won the inaugural [[AFL Women's]] (AFLW) [[best and fairest]] award in 2017 even though she had not played [[Australian rules football]] competitively in more than 17 years?</s>  <small>Source: "having had to switch from football at the age of 13 because of the lack of a pathway for girls to keep playing... Despite this, and the fact she was a few months shy of 32 when the season started" (Source: [https://www.abc.net.au/news/2019-04-04/aflw-star-erin-philips-special-talent-explained/10965886 Erin Phillips's AFLW success due to mix of fitness, fierceness, strength, smarts and athleticism]), and "Crows star judged the best player in competition's inaugural season" (Source: [https://www.afl.com.au/news/83918/erin-phillips-caps-super-season-with-aflw-best-and-fairest Simply the best: Phillips named AFLW finest])</small>
 
* ... <s> that '''[[Erin Phillips]]''' won the inaugural [[AFL Women's]] (AFLW) [[best and fairest]] award in 2017 even though she had not played [[Australian rules football]] competitively in more than 17 years?</s>  <small>Source: "having had to switch from football at the age of 13 because of the lack of a pathway for girls to keep playing... Despite this, and the fact she was a few months shy of 32 when the season started" (Source: [https://www.abc.net.au/news/2019-04-04/aflw-star-erin-philips-special-talent-explained/10965886 Erin Phillips's AFLW success due to mix of fitness, fierceness, strength, smarts and athleticism]), and "Crows star judged the best player in competition's inaugural season" (Source: [https://www.afl.com.au/news/83918/erin-phillips-caps-super-season-with-aflw-best-and-fairest Simply the best: Phillips named AFLW finest])</small>
 
** '''ALT1''': ... that '''[[Erin Phillips]]''' won the inaugural [[AFL Women's best and fairest]] award during 2017 in her first season back at age 31 after not playing [[Australian rules football]] competitively since she was 13 years old?  
 
** '''ALT1''': ... that '''[[Erin Phillips]]''' won the inaugural [[AFL Women's best and fairest]] award during 2017 in her first season back at age 31 after not playing [[Australian rules football]] competitively since she was 13 years old?  
 
:* ''Reviewed'': Exempt (First DYK)
 
:* ''Reviewed'': Exempt (First DYK)
 
<small>Improved to Good Article status by [[User:Sportsfan77777|Sportsfan77777]] ([[User talk:Sportsfan77777|talk]]). Self-nominated at 10:59, 12 April 2020 (UTC).</small>
 
<small>Improved to Good Article status by [[User:Sportsfan77777|Sportsfan77777]] ([[User talk:Sportsfan77777|talk]]). Self-nominated at 10:59, 12 April 2020 (UTC).</small>
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:* {{Question mark|15}} This hook seems to be misleading: reading that hook, I would imagine that she stopped playing in 2000 and then won the award post-career in 2017. What she actually did was not compete for 17 years (1999-2016), did compete in the 2017 season, and won the award that season. Also, probably easier to link to [[AFL Women's best and fairest]] rather than [[AFL Women's]] and [[Best and fairest]] separately. [[User:Joseph2302|<b style="color:#CCCC00">Joseph</b>]][[User talk:Joseph2302|<b style="color:#00FF00">2302</b>]] ([[User talk:Joseph2302|talk)]] 16:17, 23 April 2020 (UTC)
 
:* {{Question mark|15}} This hook seems to be misleading: reading that hook, I would imagine that she stopped playing in 2000 and then won the award post-career in 2017. What she actually did was not compete for 17 years (1999-2016), did compete in the 2017 season, and won the award that season. Also, probably easier to link to [[AFL Women's best and fairest]] rather than [[AFL Women's]] and [[Best and fairest]] separately. [[User:Joseph2302|<b style="color:#CCCC00">Joseph</b>]][[User talk:Joseph2302|<b style="color:#00FF00">2302</b>]] ([[User talk:Joseph2302|talk)]] 16:17, 23 April 2020 (UTC)
 
:* Will do the rest of the review nevertheless:
 
:* Will do the rest of the review nevertheless:
:* [[File:Yes check.svg|20px|link=|alt=&#9745;]]<span style="display:none">Y</span><!--template:tick--> Article is long enough (41k characters), is a GA, nominated in time (GA on 9 April, nominated on 12 April) and article is within policy
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:* [[File:Yes check.svg|20px|link=|alt=&#9745;]]<span style="display:none">Y</span> Article is long enough (41k characters), is a GA, nominated in time (GA on 9 April, nominated on 12 April) and article is within policy
:* [[File:Yes check.svg|20px|link=|alt=&#9745;]]<span style="display:none">Y</span><!--template:tick--> QPQ exempt as 0 previous nominations
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:* [[File:Yes check.svg|20px|link=|alt=&#9745;]]<span style="display:none">Y</span> QPQ exempt as 0 previous nominations
 
:* [[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]] This is a really interesting article, only issue that needs to be fixed is the hook. [[User:Joseph2302|<b style="color:#CCCC00">Joseph</b>]][[User talk:Joseph2302|<b style="color:#00FF00">2302</b>]] ([[User talk:Joseph2302|talk)]] 16:22, 23 April 2020 (UTC)
 
:* [[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]] This is a really interesting article, only issue that needs to be fixed is the hook. [[User:Joseph2302|<b style="color:#CCCC00">Joseph</b>]][[User talk:Joseph2302|<b style="color:#00FF00">2302</b>]] ([[User talk:Joseph2302|talk)]] 16:22, 23 April 2020 (UTC)
 
::* Thanks for the review, {{u|Joseph2302}}. I think I see what you mean. I added an updated version above. (Apologies if the comments are in the wrong place.) [[User:Sportsfan77777|Sportsfan77777]] ([[User talk:Sportsfan77777|talk]]) 21:12, 25 April 2020 (UTC)
 
::* Thanks for the review, {{u|Joseph2302}}. I think I see what you mean. I added an updated version above. (Apologies if the comments are in the wrong place.) [[User:Sportsfan77777|Sportsfan77777]] ([[User talk:Sportsfan77777|talk]]) 21:12, 25 April 2020 (UTC)
:::* [[File:Yes check.svg|20px|link=|alt=&#9745;]]<span style="display:none">Y</span><!--template:tick--> ALT1 is short enough, interesting, well-cited and unambiguous
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:::* [[File:Yes check.svg|20px|link=|alt=&#9745;]]<span style="display:none">Y</span> ALT1 is short enough, interesting, well-cited and unambiguous
:::* [[File:Symbol confirmed.svg|16px]] Good to go now. Apologies for the delay- this slipped my mind. [[User:Joseph2302|<b style="color:#CCCC00">Joseph</b>]][[User talk:Joseph2302|<b style="color:#00FF00">2302</b>]] ([[User talk:Joseph2302|talk)]] 16:15, 3 May 2020 (UTC)
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:::* [[File:Symbol confirmed.svg|16px]] Good to go now. Apologies for the delay- this slipped my mind. [[User:Joseph2302|<b style="color:#CCCC00">Joseph</b>]][[User talk:Joseph2302|<b style="color:#00FF00">2302</b>]] ([[User talk:Joseph2302|talk)]] 16:15, 3 May 2020 (UTC)</div><includeonly>|}}</includeonly><!--Please do not write below this line or remove this line. Place comments above this line.-->
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Latest revision as of 06:08, 5 May 2020

The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 06:08, 5 May 2020 (UTC)

Erin Phillips

  • Reviewed: Exempt (First DYK)

Improved to Good Article status by Sportsfan77777 (talk). Self-nominated at 10:59, 12 April 2020 (UTC).

  • Template:Question mark This hook seems to be misleading: reading that hook, I would imagine that she stopped playing in 2000 and then won the award post-career in 2017. What she actually did was not compete for 17 years (1999-2016), did compete in the 2017 season, and won the award that season. Also, probably easier to link to AFL Women's best and fairest rather than AFL Women's and Best and fairest separately. Joseph2302 (talk) 16:17, 23 April 2020 (UTC)
  • Will do the rest of the review nevertheless:
  • ☑Y Article is long enough (41k characters), is a GA, nominated in time (GA on 9 April, nominated on 12 April) and article is within policy
  • ☑Y QPQ exempt as 0 previous nominations
  • Symbol question.svg This is a really interesting article, only issue that needs to be fixed is the hook. Joseph2302 (talk) 16:22, 23 April 2020 (UTC)
  • Thanks for the review, Template:U. I think I see what you mean. I added an updated version above. (Apologies if the comments are in the wrong place.) Sportsfan77777 (talk) 21:12, 25 April 2020 (UTC)
  • ☑Y ALT1 is short enough, interesting, well-cited and unambiguous
  • Symbol confirmed.svg Good to go now. Apologies for the delay- this slipped my mind. Joseph2302 (talk) 16:15, 3 May 2020 (UTC)