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* <s>... that '''[[George FitzGeorge Hamilton]]''' ''(pictured)'', godson of [[George V|King George V]] and [[Mary of Teck|Queen Mary]], was killed in an aerial bombing raid in France during [[World War I]]? </s> <small>Sources for godparents: [https://archive.org/stream/dodspeeragebaron01unse_9#page/n869 Dod's Peerage, Ltd. 1917, p. 368.]; [https://web.archive.org/web/20180709162527/http://selsey57.org.uk/selsey57/george-e-a-a-fitzgeorge-hamilton/ Selsey 57, 2018]; and [https://www.britishnewspaperarchive.co.uk/viewer/bl/0001921/19180529/041/0003 ''Bognor Regis Observer'', 1918]. Sources for death: [https://web.archive.org/web/20180709162527/http://selsey57.org.uk/selsey57/george-e-a-a-fitzgeorge-hamilton/ Selsey 57, 2018]; [https://web.archive.org/web/20180707174026/https://www.winchestercollegeatwar.com/archive/george-edward-archibald-augustus-fitzgeorge-hamilton/ Winchester College, 2018]; and [https://www.newspapers.com/clip/22702059/great_grandson_of_royal_duke/ ''Washington Post'', 1918]</small> | * <s>... that '''[[George FitzGeorge Hamilton]]''' ''(pictured)'', godson of [[George V|King George V]] and [[Mary of Teck|Queen Mary]], was killed in an aerial bombing raid in France during [[World War I]]? </s> <small>Sources for godparents: [https://archive.org/stream/dodspeeragebaron01unse_9#page/n869 Dod's Peerage, Ltd. 1917, p. 368.]; [https://web.archive.org/web/20180709162527/http://selsey57.org.uk/selsey57/george-e-a-a-fitzgeorge-hamilton/ Selsey 57, 2018]; and [https://www.britishnewspaperarchive.co.uk/viewer/bl/0001921/19180529/041/0003 ''Bognor Regis Observer'', 1918]. Sources for death: [https://web.archive.org/web/20180709162527/http://selsey57.org.uk/selsey57/george-e-a-a-fitzgeorge-hamilton/ Selsey 57, 2018]; [https://web.archive.org/web/20180707174026/https://www.winchestercollegeatwar.com/archive/george-edward-archibald-augustus-fitzgeorge-hamilton/ Winchester College, 2018]; and [https://www.newspapers.com/clip/22702059/great_grandson_of_royal_duke/ ''Washington Post'', 1918]</small> | ||
:* ''Reviewed'': [[Template:Did you know nominations/1939 NCAA Basketball Championship Game|1939 NCAA Basketball Championship Game]] | :* ''Reviewed'': [[Template:Did you know nominations/1939 NCAA Basketball Championship Game|1939 NCAA Basketball Championship Game]] | ||
:* ''Comment'': Please feel free to suggest alternative hooks for this article! -- [[User:West Virginian|<span style="font-weight:bold;font-style:MS Sans Serif;color:#2E5894">West Virginian </span>]] [[User talk:West Virginian|<span style="font-style:MS Sans Serif;color:#CFB53B">''(talk)''</span>]] 15:46, 12 August 2018 (UTC) | :* ''Comment'': Please feel free to suggest alternative hooks for this article! -- [[User:West Virginian|<span style="font-weight:bold;font-style:MS Sans Serif;color:#2E5894">West Virginian </span>]] [[User talk:West Virginian|<span style="font-style:MS Sans Serif;color:#CFB53B">''(talk)''</span>]] 15:46, 12 August 2018 (UTC) | ||
<small>Moved to mainspace by [[User:West Virginian|West Virginian]] ([[User talk:West Virginian|talk]]). Self-nominated at 15:46, 12 August 2018 (UTC).</small> | <small>Moved to mainspace by [[User:West Virginian|West Virginian]] ([[User talk:West Virginian|talk]]). Self-nominated at 15:46, 12 August 2018 (UTC).</small> | ||
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:* [[File:Symbol confirmed.svg|16px]] Nice work! Everything checks out. ~'''''[[User:Editorofthewiki|<span style="color: #F90000;">EDDY</span>]]'' <sup>([[User talk:Editorofthewiki|<span style="color: Green;">talk</span>]]/[[Special:Contributions/Editorofthewiki|<span style="color: Green;">contribs</span>]])</sup>'''~ 16:51, 13 August 2018 (UTC) | :* [[File:Symbol confirmed.svg|16px]] Nice work! Everything checks out. ~'''''[[User:Editorofthewiki|<span style="color: #F90000;">EDDY</span>]]'' <sup>([[User talk:Editorofthewiki|<span style="color: Green;">talk</span>]]/[[Special:Contributions/Editorofthewiki|<span style="color: Green;">contribs</span>]])</sup>'''~ 16:51, 13 August 2018 (UTC) | ||
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*[[File:Symbol redirect vote 4.svg|16px]] Full review is still needed covering the DYK criteria, and also of ALT2. [[User:BlueMoonset|BlueMoonset]] ([[User talk:BlueMoonset|talk]]) 23:46, 31 August 2018 (UTC) | *[[File:Symbol redirect vote 4.svg|16px]] Full review is still needed covering the DYK criteria, and also of ALT2. [[User:BlueMoonset|BlueMoonset]] ([[User talk:BlueMoonset|talk]]) 23:46, 31 August 2018 (UTC) | ||
| + | :*Note: [[User:Cwmhiraeth|Cwmhiraeth]], I have reverted your promotion of this to prep because the ALT2 hook was never reviewed, and indeed a full review was never done, as noted by [[User:Yoninah|Yoninah]] above. Please only promote nominations where a tick is the most recent icon showing. Thanks. [[User:BlueMoonset|BlueMoonset]] ([[User talk:BlueMoonset|talk]]) 20:57, 10 September 2018 (UTC) | ||
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George FitzGeorge Hamilton
... that George FitzGeorge Hamilton (pictured), godson of King George V and Queen Mary, was killed in an aerial bombing raid in France during World War I?Sources for godparents: Dod's Peerage, Ltd. 1917, p. 368.; Selsey 57, 2018; and Bognor Regis Observer, 1918. Sources for death: Selsey 57, 2018; Winchester College, 2018; and Washington Post, 1918
- Reviewed: 1939 NCAA Basketball Championship Game
- Comment: Please feel free to suggest alternative hooks for this article! -- West Virginian (talk) 15:46, 12 August 2018 (UTC)
Moved to mainspace by West Virginian (talk). Self-nominated at 15:46, 12 August 2018 (UTC).
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Template:Ping you should provide a review that explicitly confirms that the five main DYK criteria have been met. An optional Reviewer's Template is located above the edit window. IMO the hook is not hooky enough. Yoninah (talk) 19:47, 26 August 2018 (UTC)
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...that George FitzGeorge Hamilton (pictured) was a godson of George V and Queen Mary, heir to two baronetcies, and was killed in World War I while retrieving his leave pass, according to his family?
- Template:U, how about ALT1? I crafted this hook from my mobile phone, so I will add the necessary sources here when I have access to my laptop. ALT1 is a bit long at 199 characters, but it draws in significant facts from the article prose. Please let me know if you have any recommendations for how to improve upon this! Thanks again for taking the time to improve this hook. — West Virginian (talk) 12:46, 29 August 2018 (UTC)
- Thank you for the alt hook, Template:U. I think you should zero in on the hooky part rather than synopsizing the article:
- ALT2: ... that according to family lore, George FitzGeorge Hamilton (pictured), a godson of George V, was killed in a World War I bombing raid while retrieving his leave pass? Yoninah (talk) 14:21, 29 August 2018 (UTC)
- Template:U, this works perfectly! Thank you for your suggested ALT hook! I made one minor adjustment, and that was to change great-grandson to godson. FitzGeorge Hamilton was the great-grandson of Prince George, Duke of Cambridge. I prefer George V for the hook since he has a more succinct title! Thank you again for improving this hook! — West Virginian (talk) 14:56, 31 August 2018 (UTC)
- The following source has the information for both pieces of information in the hook: Selsey57 Voluntary Community WWI Project 2018 -- West Virginian (talk) 16:38, 31 August 2018 (UTC)
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Full review is still needed covering the DYK criteria, and also of ALT2. BlueMoonset (talk) 23:46, 31 August 2018 (UTC)
- Note: Cwmhiraeth, I have reverted your promotion of this to prep because the ALT2 hook was never reviewed, and indeed a full review was never done, as noted by Yoninah above. Please only promote nominations where a tick is the most recent icon showing. Thanks. BlueMoonset (talk) 20:57, 10 September 2018 (UTC)
