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Disclaimer: I have never reviewed a DYK. I have submitted a DYK and it seems that I have been exempted from QPQ because of lack of prior DYK. However, in the spirit of QPQ, I am starting a review but request assistance. | Disclaimer: I have never reviewed a DYK. I have submitted a DYK and it seems that I have been exempted from QPQ because of lack of prior DYK. However, in the spirit of QPQ, I am starting a review but request assistance. | ||
| − | Criteria Article 1: new: OK! | + | Criteria Article 1: new: OK!</br> |
| − | Criteria Article 2: long enough (1500 characters or more) - OK! | + | Criteria Article 2: long enough (1500 characters or more) - OK!</br> |
| − | Criteria Article 3a. neutral - OK! | + | Criteria Article 3a. neutral - OK!</br> |
| − | 3b. inline citations - OK! | + | 3b. inline citations - OK!</br> |
| − | 3c. copyright violations - ***** no conclusion yet | + | 3c. copyright violations - ***** no conclusion yet </br> |
| − | Criteria Hook 1: format (length and formatting) - OK! | + | Criteria Hook 1: format (length and formatting) - OK!</br> |
| − | Criteria Hook 2: content - ***** no conclusion yet | + | Criteria Hook 2: content - ***** no conclusion yet</br> |
| + | Criteria Other 1: QPQ - not sure, will ask | ||
| + | Criteria Other 2: photo - not applicable becuase no photo so OK! | ||
| − | not done yet | + | not done yet |
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| + | Alternative hook ideas: consider a DYK about Harris DeVane's DYK that he was a peanut farmer, DYK that he was the first winner of a race at the Atlanta Motor Speedway's new racetrack configuration, DYK that he was a winner but failed to qualify in 1999 because of lack of speed. The current hook is, paraphrased, DYK that racecar driver ______ tried to debut at a race. That might not be too exciting if one assumes that all racecar drivers must have a first race in their careers. | ||
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| + | Also I did not review the 1998 NAPA 500. [[User:Vanguard10|Vanguard10]] ([[User talk:Vanguard10|talk]]) 04:24, 27 December 2017 (UTC) | ||
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Harris DeVane
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- ... that Harris DeVane attempted to make his NASCAR Winston Cup Series debut in the 1998 NAPA 500?
Created by The Bushranger (talk). Self-nominated at 02:12, 25 December 2017 (UTC).
- Note that I just revamped this entirely, including a all-new, all-singing, all-dancing hook compared to its original submission, because the muse konked me over the head with a second article to add to it. - The Bushranger One ping only 08:17, 25 December 2017 (UTC)
Review:
Disclaimer: I have never reviewed a DYK. I have submitted a DYK and it seems that I have been exempted from QPQ because of lack of prior DYK. However, in the spirit of QPQ, I am starting a review but request assistance.
Criteria Article 1: new: OK!
Criteria Article 2: long enough (1500 characters or more) - OK!
Criteria Article 3a. neutral - OK!
3b. inline citations - OK!
3c. copyright violations - ***** no conclusion yet
Criteria Hook 1: format (length and formatting) - OK!
Criteria Hook 2: content - ***** no conclusion yet
Criteria Other 1: QPQ - not sure, will ask
Criteria Other 2: photo - not applicable becuase no photo so OK!
not done yet
Alternative hook ideas: consider a DYK about Harris DeVane's DYK that he was a peanut farmer, DYK that he was the first winner of a race at the Atlanta Motor Speedway's new racetrack configuration, DYK that he was a winner but failed to qualify in 1999 because of lack of speed. The current hook is, paraphrased, DYK that racecar driver ______ tried to debut at a race. That might not be too exciting if one assumes that all racecar drivers must have a first race in their careers.
Also I did not review the 1998 NAPA 500. Vanguard10 (talk) 04:24, 27 December 2017 (UTC)