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Disclaimer: I have never reviewed a DYK. I have submitted a DYK and it seems that I have been exempted from QPQ because of lack of prior DYK. However, in the spirit of QPQ, I am starting a review but request assistance.
 
Disclaimer: I have never reviewed a DYK. I have submitted a DYK and it seems that I have been exempted from QPQ because of lack of prior DYK. However, in the spirit of QPQ, I am starting a review but request assistance.
  
Criteria Article 1: new: OK!
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Criteria Article 1: new: OK!</br>
Criteria Article 2: long enough (1500 characters or more) - OK!
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Criteria Article 2: long enough (1500 characters or more) - OK!</br>
Criteria Article 3a. neutral - OK!
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Criteria Article 3a. neutral - OK!</br>
3b. inline citations - OK!
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3b. inline citations - OK!</br>
3c. copyright violations - ***** no conclusion yet  
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3c. copyright violations - ***** no conclusion yet </br>
Criteria Hook 1: format (length and formatting) - OK!
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Criteria Hook 1: format (length and formatting) - OK!</br>
Criteria Hook 2: content - ***** no conclusion yet
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Criteria Hook 2: content - ***** no conclusion yet</br>
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Criteria Other 1: QPQ - not sure, will ask
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Criteria Other 2: photo - not applicable becuase no photo so OK!
  
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Alternative hook ideas: consider a DYK about Harris DeVane's DYK that he was a peanut farmer, DYK that he was the first winner of a race at the Atlanta Motor Speedway's new racetrack configuration, DYK that he was a winner but failed to qualify in 1999 because of lack of speed. The current hook is, paraphrased, DYK that racecar driver ______ tried to debut at a race. That might not be too exciting if one assumes that all racecar drivers must have a first race in their careers.
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Also I did not review the 1998 NAPA 500. [[User:Vanguard10|Vanguard10]] ([[User talk:Vanguard10|talk]]) 04:24, 27 December 2017 (UTC)
  
  
 
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Revision as of 04:24, 27 December 2017

Harris DeVane

Created by The Bushranger (talk). Self-nominated at 02:12, 25 December 2017 (UTC).

  • Note that I just revamped this entirely, including a all-new, all-singing, all-dancing hook compared to its original submission, because the muse konked me over the head with a second article to add to it. - The Bushranger One ping only 08:17, 25 December 2017 (UTC)

Review:

Disclaimer: I have never reviewed a DYK. I have submitted a DYK and it seems that I have been exempted from QPQ because of lack of prior DYK. However, in the spirit of QPQ, I am starting a review but request assistance.

Criteria Article 1: new: OK!
Criteria Article 2: long enough (1500 characters or more) - OK!
Criteria Article 3a. neutral - OK!
3b. inline citations - OK!
3c. copyright violations - ***** no conclusion yet
Criteria Hook 1: format (length and formatting) - OK!
Criteria Hook 2: content - ***** no conclusion yet
Criteria Other 1: QPQ - not sure, will ask Criteria Other 2: photo - not applicable becuase no photo so OK!

not done yet

Alternative hook ideas: consider a DYK about Harris DeVane's DYK that he was a peanut farmer, DYK that he was the first winner of a race at the Atlanta Motor Speedway's new racetrack configuration, DYK that he was a winner but failed to qualify in 1999 because of lack of speed. The current hook is, paraphrased, DYK that racecar driver ______ tried to debut at a race. That might not be too exciting if one assumes that all racecar drivers must have a first race in their careers.

Also I did not review the 1998 NAPA 500. Vanguard10 (talk) 04:24, 27 December 2017 (UTC)