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:::{{re|Crosstemplejay}} Sorry to bother you again. After re-reading the hook, I feel it sounds too matter-of-fact for such a tragedy. So I'm proposing ALT1 instead, which conveys essentially the same information but sounds more sympathetic. Would you mind re-reviewing it? Thanks! -[[User:Zanhe|Zanhe]] ([[User talk:Zanhe|talk]]) 20:19, 30 November 2017 (UTC)
 
:::{{re|Crosstemplejay}} Sorry to bother you again. After re-reading the hook, I feel it sounds too matter-of-fact for such a tragedy. So I'm proposing ALT1 instead, which conveys essentially the same information but sounds more sympathetic. Would you mind re-reviewing it? Thanks! -[[User:Zanhe|Zanhe]] ([[User talk:Zanhe|talk]]) 20:19, 30 November 2017 (UTC)
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:[[File:Symbol confirmed.svg|16px]]Nice tweet on the hook. I give it a tick. Yo. [[User:Crosstemplejay|<font color="blue">'''Cross'''</font><font color="blue">'''Temple'''</font>]][[user talk:crosstemplejay|<font color="red">''' Jay'''</font>]] 21:46, 30 November 2017 (UTC)
  
 
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Revision as of 21:46, 30 November 2017

He Luli

  • ... that when He Luli was 14, her home was bombed and her 12-year-old sister was killed? Source: RCCK, Lary 2015

Created by Zanhe (talk). Self-nominated at 06:24, 26 November 2017 (UTC).

  • Symbol possible vote.svg New enough, long enough, neutrally written, well referenced though some refs are in Chinese, no close paraphrasing seen. QPQ not done. Template:Ping Do so an a tick will be given. Nice hook.CrossTemple Jay 14:07, 29 November 2017 (UTC)
Template:Re thanks for your review. I've added a QPQ. -Zanhe (talk) 02:25, 30 November 2017 (UTC)
  • ALT1 ... that when He Luli was fourteen, an assassin's bombs killed her younger sister?
Template:Re Sorry to bother you again. After re-reading the hook, I feel it sounds too matter-of-fact for such a tragedy. So I'm proposing ALT1 instead, which conveys essentially the same information but sounds more sympathetic. Would you mind re-reviewing it? Thanks! -Zanhe (talk) 20:19, 30 November 2017 (UTC)
Symbol confirmed.svgNice tweet on the hook. I give it a tick. Yo. CrossTemple Jay 21:46, 30 November 2017 (UTC)