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* ... that when '''[[He Luli]]''' was 14, her home was bombed and her 12-year-old sister was killed?  <small>Source: [http://www.minge.gov.cn/minge/txt/2008-10/21/content_2530638.htm RCCK], [https://books.google.ca/books?id=x2t2BgAAQBAJ&pg=PA167&redir_esc=y#v=onepage&q&f=false Lary 2015]</small>
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* ... <s>that when '''[[He Luli]]''' was 14, her home was bombed and her 12-year-old sister was killed?</s> <small>Source: [http://www.minge.gov.cn/minge/txt/2008-10/21/content_2530638.htm RCCK], [https://books.google.ca/books?id=x2t2BgAAQBAJ&pg=PA167&redir_esc=y#v=onepage&q&f=false Lary 2015]</small>
 
:* ''Reviewed'': [[Template:Did you know nominations/North China Craton|North China Craton]]
 
:* ''Reviewed'': [[Template:Did you know nominations/North China Craton|North China Craton]]
 
<small>Created by [[User:Zanhe|Zanhe]] ([[User talk:Zanhe|talk]]). Self-nominated at 06:24, 26 November 2017 (UTC).</small>
 
<small>Created by [[User:Zanhe|Zanhe]] ([[User talk:Zanhe|talk]]). Self-nominated at 06:24, 26 November 2017 (UTC).</small>

Revision as of 23:46, 30 November 2017

He Luli

  • ... that when He Luli was 14, her home was bombed and her 12-year-old sister was killed? Source: RCCK, Lary 2015

Created by Zanhe (talk). Self-nominated at 06:24, 26 November 2017 (UTC).

  • Symbol possible vote.svg New enough, long enough, neutrally written, well referenced though some refs are in Chinese, no close paraphrasing seen. QPQ not done. Template:Ping Do so an a tick will be given. Nice hook.CrossTemple Jay 14:07, 29 November 2017 (UTC)
Template:Re thanks for your review. I've added a QPQ. -Zanhe (talk) 02:25, 30 November 2017 (UTC)
  • ALT1 ... that when He Luli was fourteen, an assassin's bombs killed her younger sister?
Template:Re Sorry to bother you again. After re-reading the hook, I feel it sounds too matter-of-fact for such a tragedy. So I'm proposing ALT1 instead, which conveys essentially the same information but sounds more sympathetic. Would you mind re-reviewing it? Thanks! -Zanhe (talk) 20:19, 30 November 2017 (UTC)
Symbol confirmed.svgNice tweet on the hook. I give it a tick. Yo. CrossTemple Jay 21:46, 30 November 2017 (UTC)