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:*[[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]] I'll review this.  I have put the question mark icon in straight away because the QPQ review is still pending.  Other review comments on the article, hook etc. will follow.  <font face="Helvetica">[[User:Hassocks5489|<font color="#00BFFF"><b>Hassocks</b></font>]][[User talk:Hassocks5489|<font color="#228B22">5489</font><font color="#C71585"><small> (Floreat Hova!)</small></font>]]</font> 11:51, 1 May 2014 (UTC)
 
:*[[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]] I'll review this.  I have put the question mark icon in straight away because the QPQ review is still pending.  Other review comments on the article, hook etc. will follow.  <font face="Helvetica">[[User:Hassocks5489|<font color="#00BFFF"><b>Hassocks</b></font>]][[User talk:Hassocks5489|<font color="#228B22">5489</font><font color="#C71585"><small> (Floreat Hova!)</small></font>]]</font> 11:51, 1 May 2014 (UTC)
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**I noticed a comment (dated 2006) on the talk page about the phrase {{xt|and he is regarded by many as the best third baseman of the deadball era}} from the lead.  Phrases like "regarded by many" may attract negative attention from readers, so I would prefer to see this tweaked to something which summarises the well-referenced info in the "Legacy" paragraph.
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**Current refs [23], [28] and [29] are bare URLs
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**Regarding the text underneath ref [21] ({{xt|"Semiprofessional" may be a euphemism. Upland employed other major leaguers between 1915 and 1919 (including Baker's longtime teammate Chief Bender), and by 1919 the Delaware County League was declared an outlaw league by organized baseball.}}): is this a quote from the source (in which case the formatting needs tweaking using a <nowiki>|quote=</nowiki> parameter), or an editorial note to the text?  If the latter, a specific reference for this claim would help.
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**Could we please have a ref for his Yankees stats, at the very end of the "New York Yankees" paragraph.
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I am happy with all other aspects of this DYK.  I have checked several of the online sources closely for copyvio/close paraphrasing, and to ensure that facts, quotes etc. in the article are correct, and I am satisfied that everything is in order.  The hook fact is supported by the cited ref, which I have examined as it is also online.  The expansion is large enough and the article was nominated in time.  Both images suggested here are used in the article and are appropriately licensed.  Both hooks are interesting and snappy; I have no preference over which one, or which image, should be used.  Happy to verify once the points above have been addressed.  <font face="Helvetica">[[User:Hassocks5489|<font color="#00BFFF"><b>Hassocks</b></font>]][[User talk:Hassocks5489|<font color="#228B22">5489</font><font color="#C71585"><small> (Floreat Hova!)</small></font>]]</font> 12:30, 1 May 2014 (UTC)
  
 
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Revision as of 12:30, 1 May 2014

Home Run Baker

Home Run Baker or Home Run Baker

  • ALT1:... that Home Run Baker (pictured) only hit 96 home runs, and never more than 12 in a season?
  • Reviewed: IOU
  • Comment: Pre-expansion was 2316. Right now, it says its at 11672, which according to my handy dandy Windows calculator, is 5.03972x expanded. – Muboshgu (talk) 20:13, 22 April 2014 (UTC)

5x expanded by Muboshgu (talk), EricEnfermero (talk). Nominated by Muboshgu (talk) at 19:23, 22 April 2014 (UTC).

  • Symbol question.svg I'll review this. I have put the question mark icon in straight away because the QPQ review is still pending. Other review comments on the article, hook etc. will follow. Hassocks5489 (Floreat Hova!) 11:51, 1 May 2014 (UTC)
Some other queries:
    • I noticed a comment (dated 2006) on the talk page about the phrase and he is regarded by many as the best third baseman of the deadball era from the lead. Phrases like "regarded by many" may attract negative attention from readers, so I would prefer to see this tweaked to something which summarises the well-referenced info in the "Legacy" paragraph.
    • Current refs [23], [28] and [29] are bare URLs
    • Regarding the text underneath ref [21] ("Semiprofessional" may be a euphemism. Upland employed other major leaguers between 1915 and 1919 (including Baker's longtime teammate Chief Bender), and by 1919 the Delaware County League was declared an outlaw league by organized baseball.): is this a quote from the source (in which case the formatting needs tweaking using a |quote= parameter), or an editorial note to the text? If the latter, a specific reference for this claim would help.
    • Could we please have a ref for his Yankees stats, at the very end of the "New York Yankees" paragraph.


I am happy with all other aspects of this DYK. I have checked several of the online sources closely for copyvio/close paraphrasing, and to ensure that facts, quotes etc. in the article are correct, and I am satisfied that everything is in order. The hook fact is supported by the cited ref, which I have examined as it is also online. The expansion is large enough and the article was nominated in time. Both images suggested here are used in the article and are appropriately licensed. Both hooks are interesting and snappy; I have no preference over which one, or which image, should be used. Happy to verify once the points above have been addressed. Hassocks5489 (Floreat Hova!) 12:30, 1 May 2014 (UTC)