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*'''ALT1:''' {{*mp}}... that according to [[Electronic Arts|EA Sports]], its '''[[Ignite (game engine)|Ignite game engine]]''' for [[Next generation (video game consoles)|next-gen]] [[video game consoles|consoles]] allows players to act more like real athletes in having to make snap judgements and brace for impacts? | *'''ALT1:''' {{*mp}}... that according to [[Electronic Arts|EA Sports]], its '''[[Ignite (game engine)|Ignite game engine]]''' for [[Next generation (video game consoles)|next-gen]] [[video game consoles|consoles]] allows players to act more like real athletes in having to make snap judgements and brace for impacts? | ||
| − | *''' | + | ** [[File:Symbol confirmed.svg|16px]] Hook length okay, verified agsinst online source. [[User:Hawkeye7|Hawkeye7]] ([[User talk:Hawkeye7|talk]]) 10:47, 25 June 2013 (UTC) |
| + | *'''ALT2:''' ... that in addition to gameplay enhancements, [[Electronic Arts|EA Sports]]{{'}} new '''[[Ignite (game engine)|Ignite game engine]]''' reportedly features "thousands" of individually modelled 3D fans with their own unique behaviours? [[User:Gatoclass|Gatoclass]] ([[User talk:Gatoclass|talk]]) 09:57, 25 June 2013 (UTC) | ||
| + | ** [[File:Symbol delete vote.svg|16px]] This is covered not in the article. [[User:Hawkeye7|Hawkeye7]] ([[User talk:Hawkeye7|talk]]) 10:47, 25 June 2013 (UTC) | ||
| + | * [[File:Symbol confirmed.svg|16px]] '''ALT1''' hook approved. [[User:Hawkeye7|Hawkeye7]] ([[User talk:Hawkeye7|talk]]) 10:47, 25 June 2013 (UTC) | ||
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Ignite (game engine)
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that Electronic Arts's Ignite game engine for next-gen sports video games models in-game athletes to anticipate collisions and become anxious towards the end of a match?
Created by Czar (talk). Self nominated at 23:46, 15 June 2013 (UTC).
- I have returned this one from the queue as the hook is too promotional - in fact it appears to be sourced to an AE press release. Gatoclass (talk) 18:55, 24 June 2013 (UTC)
Did you even bother to check the source? It is quoting from an EA press release, which the hook reproduced almost verbatim. And incidentally, you don't get to decide for me whether my concerns about an article have been met, that's not how things are done around here, you are supposed to consult with users who express concerns. In this instance, the new hook is an improvement but the phrase "become anxious toward the end of a match" doesn't make much sense and needs to be expressed with more clarity. In fact, I might look for an ALT myself as it will probably be the quickest way to resolve this. Gatoclass (talk) 08:25, 25 June 2013 (UTC)
I have taken another look at the article and source, and it's going to be difficult to find a worthwhile hook that does not have a promotional dimension, but the least that can be done is to attribute the claims about the game, so in line with those concerns here's a couple of alts:
- ALT1:
- ... that according to EA Sports, its Ignite game engine for next-gen consoles allows players to act more like real athletes in having to make snap judgements and brace for impacts?
- ALT2: ... that in addition to gameplay enhancements, EA Sports' new Ignite game engine reportedly features "thousands" of individually modelled 3D fans with their own unique behaviours? Gatoclass (talk) 09:57, 25 June 2013 (UTC)
ALT1 hook approved. Hawkeye7 (talk) 10:47, 25 June 2013 (UTC)