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:*[[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]] Long enough, nominated in timely fashion, appears neutral and cited to reliable sources. QPQ done. No copyright problems found by Earwig or me. Both hooks are concise and (with the following nitpicks) supported by ODNB source. I found the first one dull (why should I care about Grosseteste/Paris/''Chronica majora''?). The second is more interesting but (nitpick) might require a reference for the celibacy part; also "half" isn't supported by ODNB. Both hooks need some tweaking to pipe links to the precise title for ''Chronica majora'' and Treasurer of England. [[User:Espresso Addict|Espresso Addict]] <small>([[User talk:Espresso Addict|talk]])</small> 04:58, 17 January 2017 (UTC)
  
 
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John Crakehall

  • ... that the English ecclesiastic John Crakehall was present at Robert Grosseteste's deathbed and his account was used by Matthew Paris for his Chronica majora? Source: "You are strongly encouraged to quote the source text supporting each hook" (and [link] the source, or cite it briefly without using citation templates)
    • ALT1:... that although the medieval Treasurer of England John Crakehall was a clergyman sworn to celibacy, he had a daughter to whom he left half his estate? Source: "You are strongly encouraged to quote the source text supporting each hook" (and [link] the source, or cite it briefly without using citation templates)
  • Reviewed: Léon Davent
  • Comment: Other hook suggestions welcomed.

Created by Ealdgyth (talk). Self-nominated at 15:19, 11 January 2017 (UTC).

  • Symbol question.svg Long enough, nominated in timely fashion, appears neutral and cited to reliable sources. QPQ done. No copyright problems found by Earwig or me. Both hooks are concise and (with the following nitpicks) supported by ODNB source. I found the first one dull (why should I care about Grosseteste/Paris/Chronica majora?). The second is more interesting but (nitpick) might require a reference for the celibacy part; also "half" isn't supported by ODNB. Both hooks need some tweaking to pipe links to the precise title for Chronica majora and Treasurer of England. Espresso Addict (talk) 04:58, 17 January 2017 (UTC)