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::* Good observation. I've reworked that a bit. [[User:Cbl62|Cbl62]] ([[User talk:Cbl62|talk]]) 03:51, 29 June 2012 (UTC) | ::* Good observation. I've reworked that a bit. [[User:Cbl62|Cbl62]] ([[User talk:Cbl62|talk]]) 03:51, 29 June 2012 (UTC) | ||
:::*Thanks for doing that, I think it reads better now. --[[user:leech44|Mo Rock...Monstrous]] <small>[[user talk:leech44|(leech44)]]</small> 16:54, 29 June 2012 (UTC) | :::*Thanks for doing that, I think it reads better now. --[[user:leech44|Mo Rock...Monstrous]] <small>[[user talk:leech44|(leech44)]]</small> 16:54, 29 June 2012 (UTC) | ||
+ | ::::* I hadn't read the proseline essay before. It has some useful tips. Thanks for calling it to my attention. [[User:Cbl62|Cbl62]] ([[User talk:Cbl62|talk]]) 17:00, 29 June 2012 (UTC) | ||
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John Herrnstein
- ... that John Herrnstein (pictured) was the third generation of the Herrnstein family to play for the Michigan Wolverines football team?
Created/expanded by Cbl62 (talk). Self nom at 02:25, 28 June 2012 (UTC)
The end of the article is a little on the proseline side IMO, but this isn't a GAN. Expansion and hook check out.--Mo Rock...Monstrous (leech44) 02:13, 29 June 2012 (UTC)
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- Thanks for doing that, I think it reads better now. --Mo Rock...Monstrous (leech44) 16:54, 29 June 2012 (UTC)