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::* Seems fine for me [[User:Cambalachero|Cambalachero]] ([[User talk:Cambalachero|talk]]) 14:42, 31 October 2016 (UTC) | ::* Seems fine for me [[User:Cambalachero|Cambalachero]] ([[User talk:Cambalachero|talk]]) 14:42, 31 October 2016 (UTC) | ||
:::*Hi again. I read the source with Google Translate and it only mentions pans, not pots. I rewrote the sentence in the article naming some of the other vehicles of protest. I struck ALT1 and suggest instead: | :::*Hi again. I read the source with Google Translate and it only mentions pans, not pots. I rewrote the sentence in the article naming some of the other vehicles of protest. I struck ALT1 and suggest instead: | ||
− | :::*'''ALT2''': ... that in response to tax increases proposed by Minister of Energy '''[[Juan José Aranguren]]''' ''(pictured)'', Argentinians mounted noisy protests with bugles and [[cacerolazo]]s? [[User:Yoninah|Yoninah]] ([[User talk:Yoninah|talk]]) 21:59, 31 October 2016 (UTC) | + | :::*'''ALT2''': ... that in response to tax increases proposed by Minister of Energy '''[[Juan José Aranguren]]''' ''(pictured)'', Argentinians mounted noisy protests with bugles and ''[[cacerolazo]]s''? [[User:Yoninah|Yoninah]] ([[User talk:Yoninah|talk]]) 21:59, 31 October 2016 (UTC) |
+ | ::::*Seems fine, but "cacerolazo" is a loan word and according to the Manual of Style it has to be in italics, as in the original hook. I have edited the proposal accordingly. [[User:Cambalachero|Cambalachero]] ([[User talk:Cambalachero|talk]]) 00:32, 1 November 2016 (UTC) | ||
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Juan José Aranguren
- ... that Argentine minister Juan José Aranguren (pictured) proposed a number of tax increases that were received with protests and cacerolazos? Source: here
- Reviewed: Lesotho Football Association
5x expanded and sourced (BLP) by Cambalachero (talk). Self-nominated at 13:43, 24 October 2016 (UTC).
- article has been increased fivefold as required, is now long enough, hook is cited and interesting, QPQ done. Good to go. GiantSnowman 20:10, 26 October 2016 (UTC)
I'm wondering if spelling out what a cacerolazo is will attract more hits?
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... that in response to tax increases proposed by Minister of Energy Juan José Aranguren (pictured), Argentinians protested by banging pots and pans?Yoninah (talk) 20:27, 29 October 2016 (UTC)
- Seems fine for me Cambalachero (talk) 14:42, 31 October 2016 (UTC)
- Hi again. I read the source with Google Translate and it only mentions pans, not pots. I rewrote the sentence in the article naming some of the other vehicles of protest. I struck ALT1 and suggest instead:
- ALT2: ... that in response to tax increases proposed by Minister of Energy Juan José Aranguren (pictured), Argentinians mounted noisy protests with bugles and cacerolazos? Yoninah (talk) 21:59, 31 October 2016 (UTC)
- Seems fine, but "cacerolazo" is a loan word and according to the Manual of Style it has to be in italics, as in the original hook. I have edited the proposal accordingly. Cambalachero (talk) 00:32, 1 November 2016 (UTC)