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:* [[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]] The source reflects the hook, and the article appears appropriate, but the hook doesn't make sense to an average reader. Suggest something like: that the Sri Lankan [[Lanka Premier League]] cricket team the '''[[Kandy Tuskers in 2020|Kandy Tuskers]]''' is owned by Bollywood actor [[Sohail Khan]]? [[User:Sadads|Sadads]] ([[User talk:Sadads|talk]]) 13:41, 15 December 2020 (UTC) | :* [[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]] The source reflects the hook, and the article appears appropriate, but the hook doesn't make sense to an average reader. Suggest something like: that the Sri Lankan [[Lanka Premier League]] cricket team the '''[[Kandy Tuskers in 2020|Kandy Tuskers]]''' is owned by Bollywood actor [[Sohail Khan]]? [[User:Sadads|Sadads]] ([[User talk:Sadads|talk]]) 13:41, 15 December 2020 (UTC) | ||
::* {{reply to|Sadads}} I've took your advice with ALT2, does it look any better. Thanks. [[User:CreativeNorth|CreativeNorth]] ([[User talk:CreativeNorth|talk]]) 18:49, 15 December 2020 (UTC) | ::* {{reply to|Sadads}} I've took your advice with ALT2, does it look any better. Thanks. [[User:CreativeNorth|CreativeNorth]] ([[User talk:CreativeNorth|talk]]) 18:49, 15 December 2020 (UTC) | ||
| − | + | ::::*[[File:Symbol confirmed.svg|16px]] That looks right, lets go with ALT2, [[User:Sadads|Sadads]] ([[User talk:Sadads|talk]]) 21:09, 15 December 2020 (UTC) | |
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Kandy Tuskers in 2020
- ... that the LPL team the Kandy Tuskers are owned by Bollywood actor Sohail Khan? Source: https://news.abplive.com/entertainment/movies/sohail-khan-becomes-proud-owner-of-kandy-tuskers-franchise-in-lanka-premier-league-2020-1370130
- ALT1:... that the Kandy Tuskers came last in the inaugural LPL? Source: https://www.espncricinfo.com/series/lanka-premier-league-2020-21-1237339/points-table-standings
- ALT2:... that the Sri Lankan Lanka Premier League cricket team the Kandy Tuskers are owned by Bollywood actor Sohail Khan? Source: https://news.abplive.com/entertainment/movies/sohail-khan-becomes-proud-owner-of-kandy-tuskers-franchise-in-lanka-premier-league-2020-1370130
- ALT1:... that the Kandy Tuskers came last in the inaugural LPL? Source: https://www.espncricinfo.com/series/lanka-premier-league-2020-21-1237339/points-table-standings
Created by CreativeNorth (talk) and Empire AS (talk). Nominated by CreativeNorth (talk) at 12:45, 12 December 2020 (UTC).
The source reflects the hook, and the article appears appropriate, but the hook doesn't make sense to an average reader. Suggest something like: that the Sri Lankan Lanka Premier League cricket team the Kandy Tuskers is owned by Bollywood actor Sohail Khan? Sadads (talk) 13:41, 15 December 2020 (UTC)
- Template:Reply to I've took your advice with ALT2, does it look any better. Thanks. CreativeNorth (talk) 18:49, 15 December 2020 (UTC)