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:: '''ALT2:''' ... that '''''[[Kolejka (game)|Kolejka]]''''', a popular Polish educational board game about shortages in the communist [[shortage economy]], has itself been in short supply?
 
:: '''ALT2:''' ... that '''''[[Kolejka (game)|Kolejka]]''''', a popular Polish educational board game about shortages in the communist [[shortage economy]], has itself been in short supply?
 
:: Suggested ALT2 above.[[User:Georgejdorner|Georgejdorner]] ([[User talk:Georgejdorner|talk]]) 15:47, 14 December 2014 (UTC)
 
:: Suggested ALT2 above.[[User:Georgejdorner|Georgejdorner]] ([[User talk:Georgejdorner|talk]]) 15:47, 14 December 2014 (UTC)
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:::[[File:Symbol confirmed.svg|16px]] That's better, thanks. Alt 2 approved.--[[User:Ɱ|<span style="text-shadow:#BBBBBB 0.1em 0.1em 0.1em; class=texhtml"><font color="darkgreen">'''ɱ'''</font></span>]] [[User talk:Ɱ|<font color="darkgreen">(talk</font>]] · [[User:Ɱ/Briarcliff Manor|<font color="darkgreen">vbm)</font>]] 18:21, 14 December 2014 (UTC)
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Revision as of 18:21, 14 December 2014

Kolejka (game)

  • ... that Kolejka, one of the most popular Polish board games, is designed to educate people about the realities of the communist shortage economy?

5x expanded by Piotrus (talk). Self nominated at 09:45, 11 December 2014 (UTC).

  • Prose expanded five times, nominated within 7 days, has over 1500 characters, appears neutral, has multiple RSs and citations, no apparent copyvios, etc. No problems with the hook: interesting, decently neutral, and cited. QPQ is good; image N/A. Looks good.--ɱ (talk · vbm) 20:48, 11 December 2014 (UTC)
@User:Ɱ: Thank you for a quick review. I was wondering whether ALT1 hook would be more fun, see below. --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 04:55, 12 December 2014 (UTC)

ALT1: * ... that Kolejka, a popular Polish educational board game about shortages in the communist shortage economy, has suffered from shortages itself?

Also looks good. I wish there was an easy way to indicate that the game's shortage was in availability, but I can't think of a good concise way. It's not very necessary; ALT1 works fine as it is.--ɱ (talk · vbm) 05:11, 12 December 2014 (UTC)
ALT2: ... that Kolejka, a popular Polish educational board game about shortages in the communist shortage economy, has itself been in short supply?
Suggested ALT2 above.Georgejdorner (talk) 15:47, 14 December 2014 (UTC)
Symbol confirmed.svg That's better, thanks. Alt 2 approved.--ɱ (talk · vbm) 18:21, 14 December 2014 (UTC)