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:* '''Comment:''' Added links, and changed "swimming poet's workshop" to "floating poet's workshop." --[[User:Usernameunique|Usernameunique]] ([[User talk:Usernameunique|talk]]) 08:40, 24 August 2017 (UTC) | :* '''Comment:''' Added links, and changed "swimming poet's workshop" to "floating poet's workshop." --[[User:Usernameunique|Usernameunique]] ([[User talk:Usernameunique|talk]]) 08:40, 24 August 2017 (UTC) | ||
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| − | + | :** Long enough, recent enough as of the date of submission, no copyvios detected. | |
| + | :**I don't see any text that matches hook 1. The text for hook 2 appears in several places but is not cited in the article as per DYK rules. | ||
| + | :**DYK rule of thumb is one inline citation per paragraph, but there are a number of paragraphs with no citations, including paragraphs with key information about the original name of the ship and the destruction of the vessel. | ||
| + | :** Much of the article is cited to http://luserke.net/. Is this a reputable source per [[WP:RS]] criteria or a personal fan website? | ||
| + | :**''The Oxford Encyclopedia of Maritime History'' (the only cited English-language source) calls ''Krake'' a ''tjalk'', which it identifies as a "barge houseboat". Wikipedia says it's a type of [[Dutch barge]]. None of these terms appear in your article, which calls it a [[sailing ship]]. I don't know a thing about boats, but can you clarify this a bit in the article. Or perhaps {{u|The_ed17}} can help with this matter. | ||
| + | :** Minor issues aside, I am impressed with the length of this article and the quality of its sourcing overall. Well done. [[User:Gamaliel|<span style="color:DarkGreen;">Gamaliel</span>]] <small>([[User talk:Gamaliel|<span style="color:DarkGreen;">talk</span>]])</small> 23:02, 3 September 2017 (UTC) | ||
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Krake ZK 14
- ... that Krake ZK 14 encouraged phantasy and team spirit? Source: Prof. Kurt Sydow (1908–1981) Kurt Sydow: Die Lebensfahrt des Martin Luserke. Lecture of Kurt Sydow on occ. of Martin Luserke's 100st birthday, 3 May 1980 (true copy)
- ALT1:... that Krake ZK 14 was a floating poet's workshop? Source: Dr. Martin Kiessig Martin Kiessig: Die alte ZK 14. Zu Besuch auf einer schwimmenden Dichterwerkstatt. In: Martin Luserke. Gestalt und Werk. Versuch einer Wesensdeutung. Philosophical Dissertation (doctor's thesis), University of Leipzig, Germany, published by J. Särchen Verlag, Berlin 1936
- ALT2:... that Krake ZK 14 was boarded by Beate Uhse? Source: Emder Zeitung True copy of an article with picture published by Emder Zeitung, weekly magazine, series: Emder erzählen (sequence 127), 5 July 1997
- Comment: It might be of common interest to read about a historic poet's ship during Nazi era. I would appreciate any correction of my English if necessary since I am no native speaker/writer. Thank you.
Created by Wereldnieuws (talk). Self-nominated at 18:41, 9 August 2017 (UTC).
- Comment: Added links, and changed "swimming poet's workshop" to "floating poet's workshop." --Usernameunique (talk) 08:40, 24 August 2017 (UTC)
- Long enough, recent enough as of the date of submission, no copyvios detected.
- I don't see any text that matches hook 1. The text for hook 2 appears in several places but is not cited in the article as per DYK rules.
- DYK rule of thumb is one inline citation per paragraph, but there are a number of paragraphs with no citations, including paragraphs with key information about the original name of the ship and the destruction of the vessel.
- Much of the article is cited to http://luserke.net/. Is this a reputable source per WP:RS criteria or a personal fan website?
- The Oxford Encyclopedia of Maritime History (the only cited English-language source) calls Krake a tjalk, which it identifies as a "barge houseboat". Wikipedia says it's a type of Dutch barge. None of these terms appear in your article, which calls it a sailing ship. I don't know a thing about boats, but can you clarify this a bit in the article. Or perhaps Template:U can help with this matter.
- Minor issues aside, I am impressed with the length of this article and the quality of its sourcing overall. Well done. Gamaliel (talk) 23:02, 3 September 2017 (UTC)