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:* [[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]] Article is new enough, long enough, neutral, and well referenced. QPQ is done. I find the main hook very interesting. A couple of issues: 1. "fear of water" should be changed to "fear of the sea" per sources and article. They are related but not the same. 2. The sentence "direct criticism of the Supreme Court over its handling of the criminal contempt case involving the New Patriotic Party’s Sammy Awuku." is almost directly copied from the source. It needs to be paraphrased. -[[User:Zanhe|Zanhe]] ([[User talk:Zanhe|talk]]) 19:34, 21 December 2017 (UTC)
 
:* [[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]] Article is new enough, long enough, neutral, and well referenced. QPQ is done. I find the main hook very interesting. A couple of issues: 1. "fear of water" should be changed to "fear of the sea" per sources and article. They are related but not the same. 2. The sentence "direct criticism of the Supreme Court over its handling of the criminal contempt case involving the New Patriotic Party’s Sammy Awuku." is almost directly copied from the source. It needs to be paraphrased. -[[User:Zanhe|Zanhe]] ([[User talk:Zanhe|talk]]) 19:34, 21 December 2017 (UTC)
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::*{{u|Zanhe}}, looks like "fear of the water" has already been changed, and I've just rephrased the sentence you highlighted. Anything else needed? --[[User:Usernameunique|Usernameunique]] ([[User talk:Usernameunique|talk]]) 10:57, 26 December 2017 (UTC)
  
 
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Kwadwo Owusu Afriyie

Created by Crosstemplejay (talk). Self-nominated at 16:09, 18 December 2017 (UTC).

  • Symbol question.svg Article is new enough, long enough, neutral, and well referenced. QPQ is done. I find the main hook very interesting. A couple of issues: 1. "fear of water" should be changed to "fear of the sea" per sources and article. They are related but not the same. 2. The sentence "direct criticism of the Supreme Court over its handling of the criminal contempt case involving the New Patriotic Party’s Sammy Awuku." is almost directly copied from the source. It needs to be paraphrased. -Zanhe (talk) 19:34, 21 December 2017 (UTC)
  • Template:U, looks like "fear of the water" has already been changed, and I've just rephrased the sentence you highlighted. Anything else needed? --Usernameunique (talk) 10:57, 26 December 2017 (UTC)