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* ... that '''[[Kwadwo Owusu Afriyie]]''' rejected the chance to be the head of [[Ghana Ports and Harbours Authority|Ghana's ports and harbours]] because of his [[Thalassophobia|fear of water]]?  <small>Source: [https://www.primenewsghana.com/general-news/my-persistent-fear-of-the-sea-made-me-reject-gpha-appointment-sir-john.html] and [https://yen.com.gh/90386-sir-john-claims-didnt-gpha-job-all.html#90386]</small>
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* ... that '''[[Kwadwo Owusu Afriyie]]''' rejected the chance to be the head of [[Ghana Ports and Harbours Authority|Ghana's ports and harbours]] because of his [[Thalassophobia|fear of the sea]]?  <small>Source: [https://www.primenewsghana.com/general-news/my-persistent-fear-of-the-sea-made-me-reject-gpha-appointment-sir-john.html] and [https://yen.com.gh/90386-sir-john-claims-didnt-gpha-job-all.html#90386]</small>
** '''ALT1''':... that after '''[[Kwadwo Owusu Afriyie]]''' rejected to head [[Ghana Ports and Harbours Authority|Ghana's seaports]] due to his [[Thalassophobia|fear of water]], he became the head of Forestry Commission?  <small>Source: [https://www.primenewsghana.com/general-news/my-persistent-fear-of-the-sea-made-me-reject-gpha-appointment-sir-john.html] and [https://yen.com.gh/90386-sir-john-claims-didnt-gpha-job-all.html#90386]</small>
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** '''ALT1''':... that after '''[[Kwadwo Owusu Afriyie]]''' rejected the opportunity to head [[Ghana Ports and Harbours Authority|Ghana's seaports]] due to his [[Thalassophobia|fear of the sea]], he became the head of Forestry Commission?  <small>Source: [https://www.primenewsghana.com/general-news/my-persistent-fear-of-the-sea-made-me-reject-gpha-appointment-sir-john.html] and [https://yen.com.gh/90386-sir-john-claims-didnt-gpha-job-all.html#90386]</small>
 
** '''ALT2''':... that Ghanaian lawyer and politician '''[[Kwadwo Owusu Afriyie]]''', has oversight over all forest resources in Ghana?  <small>Source: [http://www.pulse.com.gh/news/presidential-appointment-sir-john-named-forestry-commission-ceo-id6367665.html#top]</small>
 
** '''ALT2''':... that Ghanaian lawyer and politician '''[[Kwadwo Owusu Afriyie]]''', has oversight over all forest resources in Ghana?  <small>Source: [http://www.pulse.com.gh/news/presidential-appointment-sir-john-named-forestry-commission-ceo-id6367665.html#top]</small>
 
** '''ALT3''':... that Ghana's high commissioner to Canada '''[[Ayikoi Otoo]]''' was once counsel for '''[[Kwadwo Owusu Afriyie]]''' concerning a contempt case at the [[Supreme Court of Ghana|Supreme Court]]?  <small>Source: [http://citifmonline.com/2017/03/17/ayikoi-otoo-gina-blay-5-others-given-ambassadorial-roles/] and [http://www.ghananewsagency.org/politics/supreme-court-fines-sir-john-hopeson--63451]</small>
 
** '''ALT3''':... that Ghana's high commissioner to Canada '''[[Ayikoi Otoo]]''' was once counsel for '''[[Kwadwo Owusu Afriyie]]''' concerning a contempt case at the [[Supreme Court of Ghana|Supreme Court]]?  <small>Source: [http://citifmonline.com/2017/03/17/ayikoi-otoo-gina-blay-5-others-given-ambassadorial-roles/] and [http://www.ghananewsagency.org/politics/supreme-court-fines-sir-john-hopeson--63451]</small>
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:* [[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]] Article is new enough, long enough, neutral, and well referenced. QPQ is done. I find the main hook very interesting. A couple of issues: 1. "fear of water" should be changed to "fear of the sea" per sources and article. They are related but not the same. 2. The sentence "direct criticism of the Supreme Court over its handling of the criminal contempt case involving the New Patriotic Party’s Sammy Awuku." is almost directly copied from the source. It needs to be paraphrased. -[[User:Zanhe|Zanhe]] ([[User talk:Zanhe|talk]]) 19:34, 21 December 2017 (UTC)
 
:* [[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]] Article is new enough, long enough, neutral, and well referenced. QPQ is done. I find the main hook very interesting. A couple of issues: 1. "fear of water" should be changed to "fear of the sea" per sources and article. They are related but not the same. 2. The sentence "direct criticism of the Supreme Court over its handling of the criminal contempt case involving the New Patriotic Party’s Sammy Awuku." is almost directly copied from the source. It needs to be paraphrased. -[[User:Zanhe|Zanhe]] ([[User talk:Zanhe|talk]]) 19:34, 21 December 2017 (UTC)
 
::*{{u|Zanhe}}, looks like "fear of the water" has already been changed, and I've just rephrased the sentence you highlighted. Anything else needed? --[[User:Usernameunique|Usernameunique]] ([[User talk:Usernameunique|talk]]) 10:57, 26 December 2017 (UTC)
 
::*{{u|Zanhe}}, looks like "fear of the water" has already been changed, and I've just rephrased the sentence you highlighted. Anything else needed? --[[User:Usernameunique|Usernameunique]] ([[User talk:Usernameunique|talk]]) 10:57, 26 December 2017 (UTC)
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:::*I've adjusted the original hook and ALT1 because they both used "fear of water" (they now say "fear of the sea"), and added "the opportunity" to ALT1, because "rejected to head" made no sense. [[User:BlueMoonset|BlueMoonset]] ([[User talk:BlueMoonset|talk]]) 21:30, 1 January 2018 (UTC)
  
 
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Kwadwo Owusu Afriyie

Created by Crosstemplejay (talk). Self-nominated at 16:09, 18 December 2017 (UTC).

  • Symbol question.svg Article is new enough, long enough, neutral, and well referenced. QPQ is done. I find the main hook very interesting. A couple of issues: 1. "fear of water" should be changed to "fear of the sea" per sources and article. They are related but not the same. 2. The sentence "direct criticism of the Supreme Court over its handling of the criminal contempt case involving the New Patriotic Party’s Sammy Awuku." is almost directly copied from the source. It needs to be paraphrased. -Zanhe (talk) 19:34, 21 December 2017 (UTC)
  • Template:U, looks like "fear of the water" has already been changed, and I've just rephrased the sentence you highlighted. Anything else needed? --Usernameunique (talk) 10:57, 26 December 2017 (UTC)
  • I've adjusted the original hook and ALT1 because they both used "fear of water" (they now say "fear of the sea"), and added "the opportunity" to ALT1, because "rejected to head" made no sense. BlueMoonset (talk) 21:30, 1 January 2018 (UTC)