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* ... that [[Kalanimoku]] caused the death his wife '''[[Likelike (wife of Kalanimoku)|Likelike]]''' ''(pictured)''  and their son Lanihau with cannon fire outside their house?
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* ... that [[Kalanimoku]] caused the death of his wife '''[[Likelike (wife of Kalanimoku)|Likelike]]''' ''(pictured)''  and their son Lanihau with cannon fire outside their house?
 
** '''ALT1''':... that '''[[Likelike (wife of Kalanimoku)|Likelike]]''' ''(pictured)'' and her son died of shock after her [[Kalanimoku|husband]] fired cannons outside their house?
 
** '''ALT1''':... that '''[[Likelike (wife of Kalanimoku)|Likelike]]''' ''(pictured)'' and her son died of shock after her [[Kalanimoku|husband]] fired cannons outside their house?
** '''ALT2''':... that [[Kalanimoku]] fired so many cannons to celebrate the birth of his son, that he indirectly killed his wife '''[[Likelike (wife of Kalanimoku)|Likelike]]''' ''(pictured)''  and their son Lanihau?
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** '''ALT2''':... that [[Kalanimoku]] fired so many cannons to celebrate the birth of his son, that he caused the death of his wife '''[[Likelike (wife of Kalanimoku)|Likelike]]''' ''(pictured)''  and their son Lanihau?
 
:* ''Reviewed'': [[Template:Did you know nominations/Philip III of Navarre]]
 
:* ''Reviewed'': [[Template:Did you know nominations/Philip III of Navarre]]
 
<small>Moved to mainspace by [[User:KAVEBEAR|KAVEBEAR]] ([[User talk:KAVEBEAR|talk]]). Self-nominated at 23:11, 21 November 2016 (UTC).</small>
 
<small>Moved to mainspace by [[User:KAVEBEAR|KAVEBEAR]] ([[User talk:KAVEBEAR|talk]]). Self-nominated at 23:11, 21 November 2016 (UTC).</small>
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:* '''Comment''' The phrase "indirectly killed" sounds clunky to me. Perhaps "caused the death of". [[User:Edwardx|Edwardx]] ([[User talk:Edwardx|talk]]) 01:03, 23 November 2016 (UTC)
 
:* '''Comment''' The phrase "indirectly killed" sounds clunky to me. Perhaps "caused the death of". [[User:Edwardx|Edwardx]] ([[User talk:Edwardx|talk]]) 01:03, 23 November 2016 (UTC)
 
::*I went ahead and changed it. I just didn't want to say directly "killed" so "caused the death" works as well. Does it need a second review or is change minuscule enough not to matter? --[[User:KAVEBEAR|KAVEBEAR]] ([[User talk:KAVEBEAR|talk]]) 02:11, 23 November 2016 (UTC)
 
::*I went ahead and changed it. I just didn't want to say directly "killed" so "caused the death" works as well. Does it need a second review or is change minuscule enough not to matter? --[[User:KAVEBEAR|KAVEBEAR]] ([[User talk:KAVEBEAR|talk]]) 02:11, 23 November 2016 (UTC)
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:::*Thanks [[User:KAVEBEAR|KAVEBEAR]]. I concur with your reasoning, and have done the same for ALT2. No review needed - this is the sort of thing that should get tweaked later on anyway. [[User:Edwardx|Edwardx]] ([[User talk:Edwardx|talk]]) 10:16, 23 November 2016 (UTC)
 
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Revision as of 10:17, 23 November 2016

Likelike (wife of Kalanimoku)

Likelike, engraving by J. Alphonse Pellion
Likelike, engraving by J. Alphonse Pellion
  • ... that Kalanimoku caused the death of his wife Likelike (pictured) and their son Lanihau with cannon fire outside their house?
    • ALT1:... that Likelike (pictured) and her son died of shock after her husband fired cannons outside their house?
    • ALT2:... that Kalanimoku fired so many cannons to celebrate the birth of his son, that he caused the death of his wife Likelike (pictured) and their son Lanihau?

Moved to mainspace by KAVEBEAR (talk). Self-nominated at 23:11, 21 November 2016 (UTC).

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  • Comment The phrase "indirectly killed" sounds clunky to me. Perhaps "caused the death of". Edwardx (talk) 01:03, 23 November 2016 (UTC)
  • I went ahead and changed it. I just didn't want to say directly "killed" so "caused the death" works as well. Does it need a second review or is change minuscule enough not to matter? --KAVEBEAR (talk) 02:11, 23 November 2016 (UTC)
  • Thanks KAVEBEAR. I concur with your reasoning, and have done the same for ALT2. No review needed - this is the sort of thing that should get tweaked later on anyway. Edwardx (talk) 10:16, 23 November 2016 (UTC)