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:*Except that "articled pupil" isn't the same as "chorister", so the hook is factually incorrect. [[User:Bencherlite|Bencherlite]][[User talk:Bencherlite|<i><sup>Talk</sup></i>]] 21:54, 14 December 2017 (UTC) | :*Except that "articled pupil" isn't the same as "chorister", so the hook is factually incorrect. [[User:Bencherlite|Bencherlite]][[User talk:Bencherlite|<i><sup>Talk</sup></i>]] 21:54, 14 December 2017 (UTC) | ||
::: (Sorry, its hard for me to imagine music studies without singing.) Can we say this? | ::: (Sorry, its hard for me to imagine music studies without singing.) Can we say this? | ||
| − | ::: '''ALT1''': ... that [[Herbert Howells]] composed one of 20 settings of '''[[Magnificat and Nunc dimittis (Gloucester)|Magnificat and Nunc dimittis for Gloucester Catredral]]''' ''(choir pictured)'' where he had studied with [[Herbert Brewer]] as a boy? --[[User:Gerda Arendt|Gerda Arendt]] ([[User talk:Gerda Arendt|talk]]) 23:45, 15 December 2017 (UTC) | + | ::: '''ALT1''': <s>... that [[Herbert Howells]] composed one of 20 settings of '''[[Magnificat and Nunc dimittis (Gloucester)|Magnificat and Nunc dimittis for Gloucester Catredral]]''' ''(choir pictured)'' where he had studied with [[Herbert Brewer]] as a boy?</s> --[[User:Gerda Arendt|Gerda Arendt]] ([[User talk:Gerda Arendt|talk]]) 23:45, 15 December 2017 (UTC) |
:::* [[File:Symbol confirmed.svg|16px]] New enough, long enough, hook is fine, Earwig shows no sign of copyvio - AGF on offline sources, neutral, I would like a source for the "Text" section, but that is not essential. Good to go. [[User:Aymatth2|Aymatth2]] ([[User talk:Aymatth2|talk]]) 22:05, 17 December 2017 (UTC) | :::* [[File:Symbol confirmed.svg|16px]] New enough, long enough, hook is fine, Earwig shows no sign of copyvio - AGF on offline sources, neutral, I would like a source for the "Text" section, but that is not essential. Good to go. [[User:Aymatth2|Aymatth2]] ([[User talk:Aymatth2|talk]]) 22:05, 17 December 2017 (UTC) | ||
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::::* '''ALT2''': ... that [[Herbert Howells]] composed the '''[[Magnificat and Nunc dimittis (Gloucester)|Magnificat and Nunc dimittis for Gloucester Cathedral]]''' ''(choir pictured)'' after learning the organ there as a boy with [[Herbert Brewer]]? | ::::* '''ALT2''': ... that [[Herbert Howells]] composed the '''[[Magnificat and Nunc dimittis (Gloucester)|Magnificat and Nunc dimittis for Gloucester Cathedral]]''' ''(choir pictured)'' after learning the organ there as a boy with [[Herbert Brewer]]? | ||
::::* How about that? [[User:Bencherlite|Bencherlite]][[User talk:Bencherlite|<i><sup>Talk</sup></i>]] 10:57, 18 December 2017 (UTC) | ::::* How about that? [[User:Bencherlite|Bencherlite]][[User talk:Bencherlite|<i><sup>Talk</sup></i>]] 10:57, 18 December 2017 (UTC) | ||
| − | + | :::::: Thanks for the idea, - I was not happy with the wording myself. Thank you also for help with the article. I don't think that it is a surprise that he composed ''after'' he learned. How is this? | |
| − | + | :::::: '''ALT3''': ... that [[Herbert Howells]] composed the '''[[Magnificat and Nunc dimittis (Gloucester)|Magnificat and Nunc dimittis for Gloucester Cathedral]]''' for the church ''(choir pictured)'' where he had learned the organ with [[Herbert Brewer]] as a boy? --[[User:Gerda Arendt|Gerda Arendt]] ([[User talk:Gerda Arendt|talk]]) 11:11, 18 December 2017 (UTC) | |
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Magnificat and Nunc dimittis (Gloucester)
... that Herbert Howells composed one of 20 settings of Magnificat and Nunc dimittis for Gloucester Catredral (choir pictured) where he had sung as a boy?Source: [1] "...and he could have known none better than Gloucester Cathedral where as a boy he had been an articled pupil of Sir Herbert Brewer"
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Created by Gerda Arendt (talk). Self-nominated at 12:00, 1 December 2017 (UTC).
- Except that "articled pupil" isn't the same as "chorister", so the hook is factually incorrect. BencherliteTalk 21:54, 14 December 2017 (UTC)
- (Sorry, its hard for me to imagine music studies without singing.) Can we say this?
- ALT1:
... that Herbert Howells composed one of 20 settings of Magnificat and Nunc dimittis for Gloucester Catredral (choir pictured) where he had studied with Herbert Brewer as a boy?--Gerda Arendt (talk) 23:45, 15 December 2017 (UTC)
New enough, long enough, hook is fine, Earwig shows no sign of copyvio - AGF on offline sources, neutral, I would like a source for the "Text" section, but that is not essential. Good to go. Aymatth2 (talk) 22:05, 17 December 2017 (UTC)
- Template:U The hook is not fine – it has an obvious typo and "one of 20" doesn't comply with MOS:NUMNOTES. Most problematically, it also implies that there are twenty settings of the Mag and Nunc for Gloucester Cathedral. So it needs some rewording
- ALT2: ... that Herbert Howells composed the Magnificat and Nunc dimittis for Gloucester Cathedral (choir pictured) after learning the organ there as a boy with Herbert Brewer?
- How about that? BencherliteTalk 10:57, 18 December 2017 (UTC)
- Thanks for the idea, - I was not happy with the wording myself. Thank you also for help with the article. I don't think that it is a surprise that he composed after he learned. How is this?
- ALT3: ... that Herbert Howells composed the Magnificat and Nunc dimittis for Gloucester Cathedral for the church (choir pictured) where he had learned the organ with Herbert Brewer as a boy? --Gerda Arendt (talk) 11:11, 18 December 2017 (UTC)
