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::{{u|Ashwin147}}, thank you for the review and your suggestion. Can you please do the needful "tweaking"? Or, tell me what portion needs a better clarity and I'd try my hand on it. Proposing the new hook based on your suggestion:-[[User:Deepak G Goswami|Deepak G Goswami]] ([[User talk:Deepak G Goswami|talk]]) 15:37, 6 August 2020 (UTC)
 
::{{u|Ashwin147}}, thank you for the review and your suggestion. Can you please do the needful "tweaking"? Or, tell me what portion needs a better clarity and I'd try my hand on it. Proposing the new hook based on your suggestion:-[[User:Deepak G Goswami|Deepak G Goswami]] ([[User talk:Deepak G Goswami|talk]]) 15:37, 6 August 2020 (UTC)
 
::* '''ALT2''':... that '''[[Mantu Ghosh]]''' ''(pictured)'' became the youngest national table tennis champion of India in 1990?  
 
::* '''ALT2''':... that '''[[Mantu Ghosh]]''' ''(pictured)'' became the youngest national table tennis champion of India in 1990?  
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::: ALT2 seems fine. But perhaps we can have the article copy edited once. Can [[User:Can I Log In]] help? Then we can send ALT2 to the prep area. [[User:Ashwin147|Ashwin147]] ([[User talk:Ashwin147|talk]]) 05:46, 13 August 2020 (UTC)
 
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Revision as of 05:46, 13 August 2020

Mantu Ghosh

Mantu Ghosh in 2019
Mantu Ghosh in 2019

Created by Deepak G Goswami (talk). Self-nominated at 16:01, 27 July 2020 (UTC).

  • Symbol confirmed.svg The article meets the criteria of newness, length and is adequately referenced. No close paraphrasing or plagiarism noticed. QPQ done and the image appears to have no licensing issues. The article could do with some tweaks for clarity. I suggest that the original hook be rephrased thus: that Mantu Ghosh (pictured) became the youngest national table tennis champion of India in 1990?. I prefer this hook since the link is readily verifiable. Ashwin147 (talk) 10:15, 6 August 2020 (UTC)
Template:U, thank you for the review and your suggestion. Can you please do the needful "tweaking"? Or, tell me what portion needs a better clarity and I'd try my hand on it. Proposing the new hook based on your suggestion:-Deepak G Goswami (talk) 15:37, 6 August 2020 (UTC)
  • ALT2:... that Mantu Ghosh (pictured) became the youngest national table tennis champion of India in 1990?
ALT2 seems fine. But perhaps we can have the article copy edited once. Can User:Can I Log In help? Then we can send ALT2 to the prep area. Ashwin147 (talk) 05:46, 13 August 2020 (UTC)