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:* '''ALT1''':... that a 1908 experiment by cell biologist '''[[Margaret Reed Lewis]]''' might have been the first ever ''in vitro'' cultivation of mammalian cells? | :* '''ALT1''':... that a 1908 experiment by cell biologist '''[[Margaret Reed Lewis]]''' might have been the first ever ''in vitro'' cultivation of mammalian cells? | ||
| + | :*'''ALT2''': ... that cell biologist '''[[Margaret Reed Lewis]]''' may have been the first person to successfully grow mammal cells ''[[in vitro]]''? | ||
:* ''Reviewed'': [[Template:Did you know nominations/Elisa Oricchio|Elisa Oricchio]] | :* ''Reviewed'': [[Template:Did you know nominations/Elisa Oricchio|Elisa Oricchio]] | ||
<small>Created by [[User:Animalparty|Animalparty]] ([[User talk:Animalparty|talk]]). Nominated by [[User:Oceanh|Oceanh]] ([[User talk:Oceanh|talk]]) at 20:29, 30 November 2015 (UTC).</small> | <small>Created by [[User:Animalparty|Animalparty]] ([[User talk:Animalparty|talk]]). Nominated by [[User:Oceanh|Oceanh]] ([[User talk:Oceanh|talk]]) at 20:29, 30 November 2015 (UTC).</small> | ||
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:* [[File:Symbol possible vote.svg|16px]] Article is new enough and long enough. It is neutral and free of close paraphrasing issues, copyright violations and plagiarism. However, there are paragraphs within the biography section which are not sourced with inline citations. I suggested a new ALT1 reworded hook which paraphrases & does not use quotes which might be confusing to reader. The hook is of a good length, is neutral and is sourced. QPQ is done. --[[User:Big iron|Big_iron]] ([[User talk:Big iron|talk]]) 10:51, 1 December 2015 (UTC) | :* [[File:Symbol possible vote.svg|16px]] Article is new enough and long enough. It is neutral and free of close paraphrasing issues, copyright violations and plagiarism. However, there are paragraphs within the biography section which are not sourced with inline citations. I suggested a new ALT1 reworded hook which paraphrases & does not use quotes which might be confusing to reader. The hook is of a good length, is neutral and is sourced. QPQ is done. --[[User:Big iron|Big_iron]] ([[User talk:Big iron|talk]]) 10:51, 1 December 2015 (UTC) | ||
| − | + | ::* {{reply|Big iron}} {{ping|Oceanh}} I (article creator) have added additional inline citations, and proposed a slightly more streamlined ALT2 above which uses simpler language, is a bit shorter, and wikilinks ''[[in vitro]]'' for the reader's convenience. Feel free to amend or strike rejected hooks. Thank you. [[User:Animalparty|--Animalparty!]] ([[User talk:Animalparty|talk]]) 00:28, 7 December 2015 (UTC) | |
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Margaret Reed Lewis
- ... that a 1908 experiment by cell biologist Margaret Reed Lewis might be "the first in vitro culture of mammalian cells ever to have been made"?
- ALT1:... that a 1908 experiment by cell biologist Margaret Reed Lewis might have been the first ever in vitro cultivation of mammalian cells?
- ALT2: ... that cell biologist Margaret Reed Lewis may have been the first person to successfully grow mammal cells in vitro?
- Reviewed: Elisa Oricchio
Created by Animalparty (talk). Nominated by Oceanh (talk) at 20:29, 30 November 2015 (UTC).
Article is new enough and long enough. It is neutral and free of close paraphrasing issues, copyright violations and plagiarism. However, there are paragraphs within the biography section which are not sourced with inline citations. I suggested a new ALT1 reworded hook which paraphrases & does not use quotes which might be confusing to reader. The hook is of a good length, is neutral and is sourced. QPQ is done. --Big_iron (talk) 10:51, 1 December 2015 (UTC)
- Template:Reply Template:Ping I (article creator) have added additional inline citations, and proposed a slightly more streamlined ALT2 above which uses simpler language, is a bit shorter, and wikilinks in vitro for the reader's convenience. Feel free to amend or strike rejected hooks. Thank you. --Animalparty! (talk) 00:28, 7 December 2015 (UTC)