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::*QPQ done by Gobonobo on August 30, 2012
 
::*QPQ done by Gobonobo on August 30, 2012
 
::*Article created  by Gobonobo on August 30, 2012 and has 4,688 characters of readable prose
 
::*Article created  by Gobonobo on August 30, 2012 and has 4,688 characters of readable prose

Revision as of 17:39, 14 September 2012

Margarete Bieber

Created/expanded by Gobonobo (talk). Self nom at 06:09, 30 August 2012 (UTC)

  • clock In progress Maile66 (talk) 00:28, 14 September 2012 (UTC)
Gobonobo, I'm having a little problem on the hooks:
  • Original hook - Nothing in the article mentions Roman clothing or costumes. There's a sentence in the article about Greek costumes, but you've sourced it with Ref 2 and Ref 3, neither of which mention clothing or costumes
  • Alt 1 hook is fine, and sourced at the end of the sentence
  • Alt 2 hook - I find in Ref 3 that the year should be 1971. You sourced it with Ref 1, which doesn't mention the Academy.
Maile66 (talk) 01:00, 14 September 2012 (UTC)
  • Original hook - I've struck this one and added ALT3 which names Greek clothing instead. Ref 3 on page 56 says "her dissertation examined the history of tragic costume in Greek art"
  • Alt 2 hook - I meant to refer to the PDF for the 1971 Academy date, but I now see that one says 1970 while the other has 1971. I've struck Alt 2 and added an Alt 4 that just reads "early 1970s".
Gobōnobo + c 01:56, 14 September 2012 (UTC)

::::Alt 3 - I don't see any new references for that, so we're still down to the article references at the end of that sentence do not mention clothing or costumes. Or...am I just not seeing something I should? Maile66 (talk) 11:05, 14 September 2012 (UTC) Disregard that comment. I finally found the reference for Atl 3, where you had it all along. Maile66 (talk) 11:21, 14 September 2012 (UTC)


The following has been checked in this review by Maile66
  • QPQ done by Gobonobo on August 30, 2012
  • Article created by Gobonobo on August 30, 2012 and has 4,688 characters of readable prose
  • NPOV, well written, well sourced
  • Every paragraph sourced
  • Hooks Alt 1, Alt 3 and Alt 4 are interesting, short enough, and sourced at the end of their sentences
  • Duplication Detector run, no copyvio found

Symbol confirmed.svg Good to go. Nice find on this pioneer in the arts, education and archaeology. Maile66 (talk) 11:54, 14 September 2012 (UTC)