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====Margarete Bieber====
 
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{{*mp}}<s>... that '''[[Margarete Bieber|Bieber]]''' studied [[clothing in ancient Rome|ancient Roman clothing styles]] before moving to the United States?</s>
 
{{*mp}}<s>... that '''[[Margarete Bieber|Bieber]]''' studied [[clothing in ancient Rome|ancient Roman clothing styles]] before moving to the United States?</s>
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<small>Created/expanded  by [[User:Gobonobo|Gobonobo]] ([[User talk:Gobonobo|talk]]).  Self nom at 06:09, 30 August 2012 (UTC)</small>
 
<small>Created/expanded  by [[User:Gobonobo|Gobonobo]] ([[User talk:Gobonobo|talk]]).  Self nom at 06:09, 30 August 2012 (UTC)</small>
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:*'''ALT1''':... that '''[[Margarete Bieber]]''' was the second woman to become a University professor in Germany?
 
:*'''ALT1''':... that '''[[Margarete Bieber]]''' was the second woman to become a University professor in Germany?
 
:*<s>'''ALT2''':... that '''[[Margarete Bieber|Bieber]]''' was named to the [[American Academy of Arts and Sciences]] in 1970?</s>
 
:*<s>'''ALT2''':... that '''[[Margarete Bieber|Bieber]]''' was named to the [[American Academy of Arts and Sciences]] in 1970?</s>
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::*Hooks Alt 1, Alt 3 and Alt 4 are interesting, short enough, and sourced at the end of their sentences
 
::*Hooks Alt 1, Alt 3 and Alt 4 are interesting, short enough, and sourced at the end of their sentences
 
::*Duplication Detector run, no copyvio found
 
::*Duplication Detector run, no copyvio found
[[File:Symbol confirmed.svg|16px]] Good to go. Nice find on this pioneer in the arts, education and archaeology. [[User:Maile66|Maile66]] ([[User talk:Maile66|talk]]) 11:54, 14 September 2012 (UTC)
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Revision as of 23:13, 14 September 2012

The following discussion is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by BlueMoonset (talk) 23:13, 14 September 2012 (UTC)

Margarete Bieber

Created/expanded by Gobonobo (talk). Self nom at 06:09, 30 August 2012 (UTC)

  • clock In progress Maile66 (talk) 00:28, 14 September 2012 (UTC)
Gobonobo, I'm having a little problem on the hooks:
  • Original hook - Nothing in the article mentions Roman clothing or costumes. There's a sentence in the article about Greek costumes, but you've sourced it with Ref 2 and Ref 3, neither of which mention clothing or costumes
  • Alt 1 hook is fine, and sourced at the end of the sentence
  • Alt 2 hook - I find in Ref 3 that the year should be 1971. You sourced it with Ref 1, which doesn't mention the Academy.
Maile66 (talk) 01:00, 14 September 2012 (UTC)
  • Original hook - I've struck this one and added ALT3 which names Greek clothing instead. Ref 3 on page 56 says "her dissertation examined the history of tragic costume in Greek art"
  • Alt 2 hook - I meant to refer to the PDF for the 1971 Academy date, but I now see that one says 1970 while the other has 1971. I've struck Alt 2 and added an Alt 4 that just reads "early 1970s".
Gobōnobo + c 01:56, 14 September 2012 (UTC)

::::Alt 3 - I don't see any new references for that, so we're still down to the article references at the end of that sentence do not mention clothing or costumes. Or...am I just not seeing something I should? Maile66 (talk) 11:05, 14 September 2012 (UTC) Disregard that comment. I finally found the reference for Atl 3, where you had it all along. Maile66 (talk) 11:21, 14 September 2012 (UTC)


The following has been checked in this review by Maile66
  • QPQ done by Gobonobo on August 30, 2012
  • Article created by Gobonobo on August 30, 2012 and has 4,688 characters of readable prose
  • NPOV, well written, well sourced
  • Every paragraph sourced
  • Hooks Alt 1, Alt 3 and Alt 4 are interesting, short enough, and sourced at the end of their sentences
  • Duplication Detector run, no copyvio found
Symbol confirmed.svg Good to go. Nice find on this pioneer in the arts, education and archaeology. Maile66 (talk) 11:54, 14 September 2012 (UTC)