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* ... that '''[[Mount Carmel East]]''' sits on land that was originally used as a farm that provided food for another hospital, [[Mount Carmel West]]? <small>[http://www.mountcarmelhealth.com/body.cfm?id=901&action=detail&ref=281 Mount Carmel Health]</small>
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*<s> ... that the land that is now '''[[Mount Carmel East]]''' was originally used as a farm that provided food for another hospital, [[Mount Carmel West]]? </s>
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*'''ALT1''': ... that '''[[Mount Carmel East]]''' sits on land that was originally used as a farm that provided food for another hospital, [[Mount Carmel West]]? <small>[http://www.mountcarmelhealth.com/body.cfm?id=901&action=detail&ref=281 Mount Carmel Health]</small>
 
:* ''Reviewed'': [[Template:Did you know nominations/Pinewood Hospital|Pinewood Hospital]]
 
:* ''Reviewed'': [[Template:Did you know nominations/Pinewood Hospital|Pinewood Hospital]]
 
:* ''Comment'': Open to any other hooks that people think could be better
 
:* ''Comment'': Open to any other hooks that people think could be better

Revision as of 22:18, 24 May 2018

Mount Carmel East

  • Reviewed: Pinewood Hospital
  • Comment: Open to any other hooks that people think could be better

Improved to Good Article status by Sixflashphoto (talk). Self-nominated at 05:30, 11 May 2018 (UTC).

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Good Idea. -- Sixflashphoto (talk) 13:55, 12 May 2018 (UTC)
Symbol confirmed.svg Looks good, but I think the hook could be rewritten a bit to flow better: ... that Mount Carmel East sits on land that was originally used as a farm that provided food for another hospital, Mount Carmel West? SounderBruce 20:28, 13 May 2018 (UTC)
Template:Re Good idea for the hook, thank you! -- Sixflashphoto (talk) 03:29, 14 May 2018 (UTC)