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− | * ... that '''[[Mount Carmel East]]''' sits on land that was originally used as a farm that provided food for another hospital, [[Mount Carmel West]]? <small>[http://www.mountcarmelhealth.com/body.cfm?id=901&action=detail&ref=281 Mount Carmel Health]</small> | + | *<s> ... that the land that is now '''[[Mount Carmel East]]''' was originally used as a farm that provided food for another hospital, [[Mount Carmel West]]? </s> |
+ | *'''ALT1''': ... that '''[[Mount Carmel East]]''' sits on land that was originally used as a farm that provided food for another hospital, [[Mount Carmel West]]? <small>[http://www.mountcarmelhealth.com/body.cfm?id=901&action=detail&ref=281 Mount Carmel Health]</small> | ||
:* ''Reviewed'': [[Template:Did you know nominations/Pinewood Hospital|Pinewood Hospital]] | :* ''Reviewed'': [[Template:Did you know nominations/Pinewood Hospital|Pinewood Hospital]] | ||
:* ''Comment'': Open to any other hooks that people think could be better | :* ''Comment'': Open to any other hooks that people think could be better |
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Mount Carmel East
... that the land that is now Mount Carmel East was originally used as a farm that provided food for another hospital, Mount Carmel West?- ALT1: ... that Mount Carmel East sits on land that was originally used as a farm that provided food for another hospital, Mount Carmel West? Mount Carmel Health
- Reviewed: Pinewood Hospital
- Comment: Open to any other hooks that people think could be better
Improved to Good Article status by Sixflashphoto (talk). Self-nominated at 05:30, 11 May 2018 (UTC).
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- Good Idea. -- Sixflashphoto (talk) 13:55, 12 May 2018 (UTC)
Looks good, but I think the hook could be rewritten a bit to flow better: ... that Mount Carmel East sits on land that was originally used as a farm that provided food for another hospital, Mount Carmel West? SounderBruce 20:28, 13 May 2018 (UTC)
- Template:Re Good idea for the hook, thank you! -- Sixflashphoto (talk) 03:29, 14 May 2018 (UTC)
- Good Idea. -- Sixflashphoto (talk) 13:55, 12 May 2018 (UTC)