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:* [[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]] New enough (was a redirect until recently), long enough, written in a neutral manner, well-sourced (AGF on many German sources), no copyvio issue detected. Image has a valid copyright tag and QPQ is in order (although it seems to need new response). The hook is cited (AGF on German source), but I feel it's a bit clumsy and not very accessible to a non-specialist reader. For example, what does it mean "70th season" and how is it related to the opening of [[Elbphilharmonie]]? And what is [[Elbphilharmonie]]? Please try with a simpler hook for the general reader in the main page. Also, consider reading through the article again and improving the English (e.g. "It has promoted to make music more accessible" and others). [[User:HaEr48|HaEr48]] ([[User talk:HaEr48|talk]]) 07:02, 14 April 2017 (UTC)
  
 
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Revision as of 07:02, 14 April 2017

NDR Chor

Elbphilharmonie illuminated on the opening night
Elbphilharmonie illuminated on the opening night

Converted from a redirect by Gerda Arendt (talk). Self-nominated at 21:51, 4 April 2017 (UTC).

  • 16px New enough (was a redirect until recently), long enough, written in a neutral manner, well-sourced (AGF on many German sources), no copyvio issue detected. Image has a valid copyright tag and QPQ is in order (although it seems to need new response). The hook is cited (AGF on German source), but I feel it's a bit clumsy and not very accessible to a non-specialist reader. For example, what does it mean "70th season" and how is it related to the opening of Elbphilharmonie? And what is Elbphilharmonie? Please try with a simpler hook for the general reader in the main page. Also, consider reading through the article again and improving the English (e.g. "It has promoted to make music more accessible" and others). HaEr48 (talk) 07:02, 14 April 2017 (UTC)