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*ALT1 ... that '''[[Niayes]]''', a region of Senegal important for fishing, market gardening, cattle-grazing and birds, is at risk of [[desertification]]?  
 
*ALT1 ... that '''[[Niayes]]''', a region of Senegal important for fishing, market gardening, cattle-grazing and birds, is at risk of [[desertification]]?  
 
*ALT2 ... that '''[[Niayes]]''', a string of lakes behind sand dunes in Senegal which are designated as an [[Important Bird Area]], is at risk of [[desertification]]?  
 
*ALT2 ... that '''[[Niayes]]''', a string of lakes behind sand dunes in Senegal which are designated as an [[Important Bird Area]], is at risk of [[desertification]]?  
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::[[File:Symbol voting keep.svg|16px]] ALT1 and ALT2 are both acceptable (though I think ALT1 is the somewhat more eye-catching hook); French source accepted AGF. Rest of review per Zerach. Should be good to go now. [[User:Narutolovehinata5|Narutolovehinata5]] <sup>[[User talk:Narutolovehinata5|t]][[Special:Contributions/Narutolovehinata5|c]][[WP:CSD|csd]][[Special:Newpages|new]]</sup> 14:36, 16 May 2019 (UTC)
 
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Niayes

  • ... that the Niayes region of Senegal is important for fishing, market gardening, cattle-grazing and birds? Source: "The whole site is very important in terms of human use, for cattle-grazing, fishing, vegetable, fruit and rice-growing and market gardening" and "The niayes as a whole are particularly important for a wide variety of breeding and wintering waterbirds and also raptors."

Created by Cwmhiraeth (talk). Self-nominated at 08:44, 12 May 2019 (UTC).

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  • Symbol redirect vote 4.svg Perhaps another editor could reconsider this rejection. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 08:25, 13 May 2019 (UTC)
I don't think the hook is terrible, it just feels ordinary: plenty of places are "important for fishing, market gardening, cattle-grazing and birds", and the hook fails to show how the subject is special in this regard. Narutolovehinata5 tccsdnew 02:10, 14 May 2019 (UTC)
How about? Cwmhiraeth (talk) 06:08, 14 May 2019 (UTC)
Symbol voting keep.svg ALT1 and ALT2 are both acceptable (though I think ALT1 is the somewhat more eye-catching hook); French source accepted AGF. Rest of review per Zerach. Should be good to go now. Narutolovehinata5 tccsdnew 14:36, 16 May 2019 (UTC)