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:* [[File:Symbol confirmed.svg|16px]] Date, length and hook all OK. I suggest maybe removing a few links (except the invested one) because it may deflect potential views away from the article, but not a major issue. Good to go. <span style="text-shadow:grey 0.5em 0.5em 0.6em;"> '''[[User:The C of E|<font color="red">The C of E </font><font color="blue"> God Save the Queen!</font>]]''' ([[User talk:The C of E|<font color="darkblue">talk</font>]])</span> 23:33, 31 December 2013 (UTC) | :* [[File:Symbol confirmed.svg|16px]] Date, length and hook all OK. I suggest maybe removing a few links (except the invested one) because it may deflect potential views away from the article, but not a major issue. Good to go. <span style="text-shadow:grey 0.5em 0.5em 0.6em;"> '''[[User:The C of E|<font color="red">The C of E </font><font color="blue"> God Save the Queen!</font>]]''' ([[User talk:The C of E|<font color="darkblue">talk</font>]])</span> 23:33, 31 December 2013 (UTC) | ||
| − | + | ::*[[File:Symbol possible vote.svg|16px]] The article needs copyediting. Commas are missing and sentences are fragmented, e.g.: "Noel Ernest Money was born in [[Montreal]] Canada on 17 March 1867. The eldest son of Captain Albert William Money of the [[Royal Canadian Rifle Regiment]]." [[User:Yoninah|Yoninah]] ([[User talk:Yoninah|talk]]) 01:28, 2 January 2014 (UTC) | |
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Noel Money
- ... that Noel Money was invested as a Companion of the Order of St Michael and St George and the Distinguished Service Order and bar, for a second award?
Created by Jim Sweeney (talk). Nominated by Tentinator (talk) at 13:31, 25 December 2013 (UTC).
Date, length and hook all OK. I suggest maybe removing a few links (except the invested one) because it may deflect potential views away from the article, but not a major issue. Good to go. The C of E God Save the Queen! (talk) 23:33, 31 December 2013 (UTC)
The article needs copyediting. Commas are missing and sentences are fragmented, e.g.: "Noel Ernest Money was born in Montreal Canada on 17 March 1867. The eldest son of Captain Albert William Money of the Royal Canadian Rifle Regiment." Yoninah (talk) 01:28, 2 January 2014 (UTC)