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| − | * ... that the '''[[Open Hand Monument]]''' ''(pictured)'', an insignia of [[Chandigarh]], is a frequent theme in [[Le Corbusier]]'s architecture, a symbol of "peace and reconciliation. It is open to give and open to receive"? | + | *<s> ... that the '''[[Open Hand Monument]]''' ''(pictured)'', an insignia of [[Chandigarh]], is a frequent theme in [[Le Corbusier]]'s architecture, a symbol of "peace and reconciliation. It is open to give and open to receive"?</s> |
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::*[[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]] I copyedited the article and added a tag where a cite is needed. I think the hook quote is a little clumsy with the period in there. Why don't you mention the symbolism of the sculpture to the city of Chandigarh, quoted in Betts, pp. 61-62? | ::*[[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]] I copyedited the article and added a tag where a cite is needed. I think the hook quote is a little clumsy with the period in there. Why don't you mention the symbolism of the sculpture to the city of Chandigarh, quoted in Betts, pp. 61-62? | ||
[[User:Yoninah|Yoninah]] ([[User talk:Yoninah|talk]]) 22:36, 27 July 2015 (UTC) | [[User:Yoninah|Yoninah]] ([[User talk:Yoninah|talk]]) 22:36, 27 July 2015 (UTC) | ||
| − | :::* Thanks for the review. I have fixed the ref to the tag. I propose this '''ALT1 Hook'''...that the '''[[Open Hand Monument]]''' ''(pictured)'' designed by [[Le Corbusier]] symbolizes "hand to give and the hand to take; peace and prosperity, and the unity of mankind"?--'''[[User talk:Nvvchar|<span style="font-variant:small-caps;color:#003366">Nvvchar</span>]]'''. 06:11, 28 July 2015 (UTC) | + | :::* Thanks for the review. I have fixed the ref to the tag. I propose this '''ALT1 Hook''': |
| + | :::*'''ALT1''': ...that the '''[[Open Hand Monument]]''' ''(pictured)'' designed by [[Le Corbusier]] symbolizes "the hand to give and the hand to take; peace and prosperity, and the unity of mankind"?--'''[[User talk:Nvvchar|<span style="font-variant:small-caps;color:#003366">Nvvchar</span>]]'''. 06:11, 28 July 2015 (UTC) | ||
| + | ::::*[[File:Symbol confirmed.svg|16px]] Yes, that works better. ALT1 hook ref verified and cited inline. Image is freely-licensed. Rest of review per Coretheapple. ALT1 good to go. [[User:Yoninah|Yoninah]] ([[User talk:Yoninah|talk]]) 11:28, 28 July 2015 (UTC) | ||
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Open Hand Monument
... that the Open Hand Monument (pictured), an insignia of Chandigarh, is a frequent theme in Le Corbusier's architecture, a symbol of "peace and reconciliation. It is open to give and open to receive"?
5x expanded by Nvvchar (talk). Self-nominated at 14:18, 13 July 2015 (UTC).
Long enough, no copyvios evident, 5X easily attained and QPQ confirmed. Offline hook accepted AGF. Coretheapple (talk) 13:46, 15 July 2015 (UTC)
Yoninah (talk) 22:36, 27 July 2015 (UTC)
- Thanks for the review. I have fixed the ref to the tag. I propose this ALT1 Hook:
- ALT1: ...that the Open Hand Monument (pictured) designed by Le Corbusier symbolizes "the hand to give and the hand to take; peace and prosperity, and the unity of mankind"?--Nvvchar. 06:11, 28 July 2015 (UTC)
