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(Wording tweak as requested; QPQ still pending)
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* ... that [[2018 Winter Paralympics|Paralympic]] [[snowboarding at the 2018 Winter Paralympics – Men's banked slalom|silver-medal winning]] [[snowboard racing|snowboarder]] '''[[Patrick Mayrhofer]]''' was the first person in the world to get a [[bionics|bionic]] [[prosthesis]] that is controlled by his neural signals? <s>to his nerve impulses?</s> <small>Sources: [https://www.meinbezirk.at/rohrbach/sport/mayrhofer-ist-behindertensportler-des-jahres-d1533244.html MeinBezirk.at]: "{{lang|de|Mayrhofer erhielt daraufhin als erster Mensch weltweit eine bionische Handprothese.}} [As a result, Mayrhofer was the first person worldwide to receive a bionic hand prosthesis.]", [http://www.dw.com/en/europes-first-bionic-hand-still-going-strong-a-year-on/a-15213846 Deutsche Welle]: "Austrian scientists pioneer a bionic hand powered by neural signals. The first man to get one says...", [http://www.bbc.co.uk/news/science-environment-13273348 BBC]: "Last year, a 24-year-old Austrian named Patrick was the first patient in the world to choose to have his hand amputated, again by Professor Aszmann, and a bionic replacement fitted."</small>
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* <s>... that [[2018 Winter Paralympics|Paralympic]] [[snowboarding at the 2018 Winter Paralympics – Men's banked slalom|silver-medal winning]] [[snowboard racing|snowboarder]] '''[[Patrick Mayrhofer]]''' was the first person in the world to get a [[bionics|bionic]] [[prosthesis]] that is controlled by his neural signals? to his nerve impulses?</s> <small>Sources: [https://www.meinbezirk.at/rohrbach/sport/mayrhofer-ist-behindertensportler-des-jahres-d1533244.html MeinBezirk.at]: "{{lang|de|Mayrhofer erhielt daraufhin als erster Mensch weltweit eine bionische Handprothese.}} [As a result, Mayrhofer was the first person worldwide to receive a bionic hand prosthesis.]", [http://www.dw.com/en/europes-first-bionic-hand-still-going-strong-a-year-on/a-15213846 Deutsche Welle]: "Austrian scientists pioneer a bionic hand powered by neural signals. The first man to get one says...", [http://www.bbc.co.uk/news/science-environment-13273348 BBC]: "Last year, a 24-year-old Austrian named Patrick was the first patient in the world to choose to have his hand amputated, again by Professor Aszmann, and a bionic replacement fitted."</small>
 
** '''ALT1''':... that [[snowboarding at the 2018 Winter Paralympics – Men's banked slalom|silver-medal winning]] [[snowboard racing|snowboarder]] '''[[Patrick Mayrhofer]]''' joined the [[Austria at the 2018 Winter Paralympics|Austrian Paralympic team]] after seeing their stall at a [[prosthesis|prosthetics]] [[trade show]]?  <small>Source: [https://www.pyeongchang2018.com/en/game-time/results/PWG2018/en/snowboard/athlete-profile-n3047895-patrick-mayrhofer.htm PyeongChang2018.com]: "In 2012 he was at an exhibition about prosthetics where the Austrian Paralympic Committee had a booth. He talked to them and chose to pursue Para snowboard.", [https://www.ottobock.com/en/paralympics/athletes/patrick-mayrhofer/ Ottobock]: "Following rehabilitation, Mayrhofer visited a prosthetics trade show in 2012, where he came across a booth run by Austria’s para-sport team."</small>
 
** '''ALT1''':... that [[snowboarding at the 2018 Winter Paralympics – Men's banked slalom|silver-medal winning]] [[snowboard racing|snowboarder]] '''[[Patrick Mayrhofer]]''' joined the [[Austria at the 2018 Winter Paralympics|Austrian Paralympic team]] after seeing their stall at a [[prosthesis|prosthetics]] [[trade show]]?  <small>Source: [https://www.pyeongchang2018.com/en/game-time/results/PWG2018/en/snowboard/athlete-profile-n3047895-patrick-mayrhofer.htm PyeongChang2018.com]: "In 2012 he was at an exhibition about prosthetics where the Austrian Paralympic Committee had a booth. He talked to them and chose to pursue Para snowboard.", [https://www.ottobock.com/en/paralympics/athletes/patrick-mayrhofer/ Ottobock]: "Following rehabilitation, Mayrhofer visited a prosthetics trade show in 2012, where he came across a booth run by Austria’s para-sport team."</small>
 
** '''ALT2''':... that [[2018 Winter Paralympics|Paralympic]] [[snowboarding at the 2018 Winter Paralympics – Men's banked slalom|silver-medal winning]] [[snowboard racing|snowboarder]] '''[[Patrick Mayrhofer]]''' joined the company [[Ottobock]], who made his [[bionics|bionic]] [[prosthesis|prosthetics]], helping other amputees learn to use their prostheses? <small>Source: [http://www.cybathlon.ethz.ch/cybathlon-news/2015/06/pilots-of-the-cyathlon-patrick-mayrhofer.html ETH Zurich]</small>
 
** '''ALT2''':... that [[2018 Winter Paralympics|Paralympic]] [[snowboarding at the 2018 Winter Paralympics – Men's banked slalom|silver-medal winning]] [[snowboard racing|snowboarder]] '''[[Patrick Mayrhofer]]''' joined the company [[Ottobock]], who made his [[bionics|bionic]] [[prosthesis|prosthetics]], helping other amputees learn to use their prostheses? <small>Source: [http://www.cybathlon.ethz.ch/cybathlon-news/2015/06/pilots-of-the-cyathlon-patrick-mayrhofer.html ETH Zurich]</small>
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::: {{reply|violetriga|label1=violet/riga}} Sorry about that; I'd completely forgotten that I still had the QPQ outstanding and hadn't spotted that you had replied. Thanks for having {{tl|ping}}ed me to bring it to my attention — I'll take a look over the weekend and {{tl|ping}} you back. Thanks again! — <span class="vcard"><span class="fn">[[User:OwenBlacker|OwenBlacker]]</span> <small>([[User talk:OwenBlacker|talk]]; please &#123;&#123;[[Template:ping|ping]]&#125;&#125; me in replies)</small></span> 09:23, 20 April 2018 (UTC) <br/><small>PS: I've never seen that use of &lt;sub&gt;&lt;sup&gt; to make smaller middle-aligned text before. Nice effect! 😊</small>
 
::: {{reply|violetriga|label1=violet/riga}} Sorry about that; I'd completely forgotten that I still had the QPQ outstanding and hadn't spotted that you had replied. Thanks for having {{tl|ping}}ed me to bring it to my attention — I'll take a look over the weekend and {{tl|ping}} you back. Thanks again! — <span class="vcard"><span class="fn">[[User:OwenBlacker|OwenBlacker]]</span> <small>([[User talk:OwenBlacker|talk]]; please &#123;&#123;[[Template:ping|ping]]&#125;&#125; me in replies)</small></span> 09:23, 20 April 2018 (UTC) <br/><small>PS: I've never seen that use of &lt;sub&gt;&lt;sup&gt; to make smaller middle-aligned text before. Nice effect! 😊</small>
 
:::: {{reply|violetriga|label1=violet/riga}} I've tweaked the wording there — the change of "neural signals" to "nerve impulses" was me trying to simplify the wording of the hook. Is that better? (I'll go find one to QPQ now.) — <span class="vcard"><span class="fn">[[User:OwenBlacker|OwenBlacker]]</span> <small>([[User talk:OwenBlacker|talk]]; please &#123;&#123;[[Template:ping|ping]]&#125;&#125; me in replies)</small></span> 20:34, 23 April 2018 (UTC)
 
:::: {{reply|violetriga|label1=violet/riga}} I've tweaked the wording there — the change of "neural signals" to "nerve impulses" was me trying to simplify the wording of the hook. Is that better? (I'll go find one to QPQ now.) — <span class="vcard"><span class="fn">[[User:OwenBlacker|OwenBlacker]]</span> <small>([[User talk:OwenBlacker|talk]]; please &#123;&#123;[[Template:ping|ping]]&#125;&#125; me in replies)</small></span> 20:34, 23 April 2018 (UTC)
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:::::{{reply|OwenBlacker}} Okay that works better. Delving into this a little further I'm not fully sure of the hook's claim. Examining the sources does not backup the claim "...first person in the world to get a bionic prosthesis that is controlled by his neural signals":
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:::::*Article: "first patient in the world to '''undergo elective amputation and receive a bionic prosthesis'''"
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:::::*MB: "first person worldwide to receive a bionic '''hand''' prosthesis"
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:::::*DW: "'''Europe's first bionic hand'''" & "...a bionic '''hand''' powered by neural signals. The first man to get one..."
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:::::*BBC: "Patrick was the first patient in the world to choose to have his hand amputated"
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:::::I therefore suggest the following ALT hooks:
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:::::*'''ALT0a''': ... that [[2018 Winter Paralympics|Paralympic]] [[snowboarding at the 2018 Winter Paralympics – Men's banked slalom|silver-medal winning]] [[snowboard racing|snowboarder]] '''[[Patrick Mayrhofer]]''' was the first person in the world to get a [[bionics|bionic]] hand [[prosthesis]] that is controlled by his neural signals?
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:::::*'''ALT0b''': ... that [[2018 Winter Paralympics|Paralympic]] [[snowboarding at the 2018 Winter Paralympics – Men's banked slalom|silver-medal winning]] [[snowboard racing|snowboarder]] '''[[Patrick Mayrhofer]]''' was the first person in the world to get a [[bionics|bionic]] hand [[prosthesis]] after an elective amputation?
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:::::*'''ALT0c''': ... that [[2018 Winter Paralympics|Paralympic]] [[snowboarding at the 2018 Winter Paralympics – Men's banked slalom|silver-medal winning]] [[snowboard racing|snowboarder]] '''[[Patrick Mayrhofer]]''' was the first person in the world to undergo elective amputation and get a [[bionics|bionic]] [[prosthesis]]?
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Revision as of 21:35, 23 April 2018

Patrick Mayrhofer

  • Reviewed: QPQ pending

Created by OwenBlacker (talk). Self-nominated at 22:37, 20 March 2018 (UTC).

  • Review:

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Template:Ping - are you planning to complete this nomination? violet/riga [talk] 07:40, 20 April 2018 (UTC)
Template:Reply Sorry about that; I'd completely forgotten that I still had the QPQ outstanding and hadn't spotted that you had replied. Thanks for having {{ping}}ed me to bring it to my attention — I'll take a look over the weekend and {{ping}} you back. Thanks again! — OwenBlacker (talk; please {{ping}} me in replies) 09:23, 20 April 2018 (UTC)
PS: I've never seen that use of <sub><sup> to make smaller middle-aligned text before. Nice effect! 😊
Template:Reply I've tweaked the wording there — the change of "neural signals" to "nerve impulses" was me trying to simplify the wording of the hook. Is that better? (I'll go find one to QPQ now.) — OwenBlacker (talk; please {{ping}} me in replies) 20:34, 23 April 2018 (UTC)
Template:Reply Okay that works better. Delving into this a little further I'm not fully sure of the hook's claim. Examining the sources does not backup the claim "...first person in the world to get a bionic prosthesis that is controlled by his neural signals":
  • Article: "first patient in the world to undergo elective amputation and receive a bionic prosthesis"
  • MB: "first person worldwide to receive a bionic hand prosthesis"
  • DW: "Europe's first bionic hand" & "...a bionic hand powered by neural signals. The first man to get one..."
  • BBC: "Patrick was the first patient in the world to choose to have his hand amputated"
I therefore suggest the following ALT hooks:
Symbol redirect vote 4.svg We're going to need a third party to look over these now - may as well get that started while you work on the QPQ. violet/riga [talk] 21:35, 23 April 2018 (UTC)