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** '''ALT1''':... that [[snowboarding at the 2018 Winter Paralympics – Men's banked slalom|silver-medal winning]] [[snowboard racing|snowboarder]] '''[[Patrick Mayrhofer]]''' joined the [[Austria at the 2018 Winter Paralympics|Austrian Paralympic team]] after seeing their stall at a [[prosthesis|prosthetics]] [[trade show]]? <small>Source: [https://www.pyeongchang2018.com/en/game-time/results/PWG2018/en/snowboard/athlete-profile-n3047895-patrick-mayrhofer.htm PyeongChang2018.com]: "In 2012 he was at an exhibition about prosthetics where the Austrian Paralympic Committee had a booth. He talked to them and chose to pursue Para snowboard.", [https://www.ottobock.com/en/paralympics/athletes/patrick-mayrhofer/ Ottobock]: "Following rehabilitation, Mayrhofer visited a prosthetics trade show in 2012, where he came across a booth run by Austria’s para-sport team."</small> | ** '''ALT1''':... that [[snowboarding at the 2018 Winter Paralympics – Men's banked slalom|silver-medal winning]] [[snowboard racing|snowboarder]] '''[[Patrick Mayrhofer]]''' joined the [[Austria at the 2018 Winter Paralympics|Austrian Paralympic team]] after seeing their stall at a [[prosthesis|prosthetics]] [[trade show]]? <small>Source: [https://www.pyeongchang2018.com/en/game-time/results/PWG2018/en/snowboard/athlete-profile-n3047895-patrick-mayrhofer.htm PyeongChang2018.com]: "In 2012 he was at an exhibition about prosthetics where the Austrian Paralympic Committee had a booth. He talked to them and chose to pursue Para snowboard.", [https://www.ottobock.com/en/paralympics/athletes/patrick-mayrhofer/ Ottobock]: "Following rehabilitation, Mayrhofer visited a prosthetics trade show in 2012, where he came across a booth run by Austria’s para-sport team."</small> | ||
** '''ALT2''':... that [[2018 Winter Paralympics|Paralympic]] [[snowboarding at the 2018 Winter Paralympics – Men's banked slalom|silver-medal winning]] [[snowboard racing|snowboarder]] '''[[Patrick Mayrhofer]]''' joined the company [[Ottobock]], who made his [[bionics|bionic]] [[prosthesis|prosthetics]], helping other amputees learn to use their prostheses? <small>Source: [http://www.cybathlon.ethz.ch/cybathlon-news/2015/06/pilots-of-the-cyathlon-patrick-mayrhofer.html ETH Zurich]</small> | ** '''ALT2''':... that [[2018 Winter Paralympics|Paralympic]] [[snowboarding at the 2018 Winter Paralympics – Men's banked slalom|silver-medal winning]] [[snowboard racing|snowboarder]] '''[[Patrick Mayrhofer]]''' joined the company [[Ottobock]], who made his [[bionics|bionic]] [[prosthesis|prosthetics]], helping other amputees learn to use their prostheses? <small>Source: [http://www.cybathlon.ethz.ch/cybathlon-news/2015/06/pilots-of-the-cyathlon-patrick-mayrhofer.html ETH Zurich]</small> | ||
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<small>Created by [[User:OwenBlacker|OwenBlacker]] ([[User talk:OwenBlacker|talk]]). Self-nominated at 22:37, 20 March 2018 (UTC).</small> | <small>Created by [[User:OwenBlacker|OwenBlacker]] ([[User talk:OwenBlacker|talk]]). Self-nominated at 22:37, 20 March 2018 (UTC).</small> | ||
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--> We're going to need a third party to look over these now - may as well get that started while you work on the QPQ. [[user:violetriga|violet/riga]] <sub><sup>[[user talk:violetriga|[talk]]]</sup></sub> 21:35, 23 April 2018 (UTC) | --> We're going to need a third party to look over these now - may as well get that started while you work on the QPQ. [[user:violetriga|violet/riga]] <sub><sup>[[user talk:violetriga|[talk]]]</sup></sub> 21:35, 23 April 2018 (UTC) | ||
| + | :::::: {{Reply|violetriga|label1=violet/riga}} Oh, good spot; thank you. I definitely prefer ALT0a of those 3, as the neural signals part is just freaking cool. It could be worth adding a link to [[Neural engineering]] to ALT0a; ALT0b and ALT0c could link to [[Elective surgery]] and [[Amputation]]. I've completed the QPQ now, [[Template:Did you know nominations/Alleged Libyan influence in the 2007 French elections|here]]. Thanks again! — <span class="vcard"><span class="fn">[[User:OwenBlacker|OwenBlacker]]</span> <small>([[User talk:OwenBlacker|talk]]; please {{[[Template:ping|ping]]}} me in replies)</small></span> 22:08, 23 April 2018 (UTC) | ||
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Patrick Mayrhofer
... that Paralympic silver-medal winning snowboarder Patrick Mayrhofer was the first person in the world to get a bionic prosthesis that is controlled by his neural signals? to his nerve impulses?Sources: MeinBezirk.at: "Mayrhofer erhielt daraufhin als erster Mensch weltweit eine bionische Handprothese. [As a result, Mayrhofer was the first person worldwide to receive a bionic hand prosthesis.]", Deutsche Welle: "Austrian scientists pioneer a bionic hand powered by neural signals. The first man to get one says...", BBC: "Last year, a 24-year-old Austrian named Patrick was the first patient in the world to choose to have his hand amputated, again by Professor Aszmann, and a bionic replacement fitted."- ALT1:... that silver-medal winning snowboarder Patrick Mayrhofer joined the Austrian Paralympic team after seeing their stall at a prosthetics trade show? Source: PyeongChang2018.com: "In 2012 he was at an exhibition about prosthetics where the Austrian Paralympic Committee had a booth. He talked to them and chose to pursue Para snowboard.", Ottobock: "Following rehabilitation, Mayrhofer visited a prosthetics trade show in 2012, where he came across a booth run by Austria’s para-sport team."
- ALT2:... that Paralympic silver-medal winning snowboarder Patrick Mayrhofer joined the company Ottobock, who made his bionic prosthetics, helping other amputees learn to use their prostheses? Source: ETH Zurich
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QPQ pendingT:DYKN/Alleged Libyan influence in the 2007 French elections (22:08, 23 April 2018 (UTC))
- Reviewed:
Created by OwenBlacker (talk). Self-nominated at 22:37, 20 March 2018 (UTC).
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- Template:Ping - are you planning to complete this nomination? violet/riga [talk] 07:40, 20 April 2018 (UTC)
- Template:Reply Sorry about that; I'd completely forgotten that I still had the QPQ outstanding and hadn't spotted that you had replied. Thanks for having {{ping}}ed me to bring it to my attention — I'll take a look over the weekend and {{ping}} you back. Thanks again! — OwenBlacker (talk; please {{ping}} me in replies) 09:23, 20 April 2018 (UTC)
PS: I've never seen that use of <sub><sup> to make smaller middle-aligned text before. Nice effect! 😊- Template:Reply I've tweaked the wording there — the change of "neural signals" to "nerve impulses" was me trying to simplify the wording of the hook. Is that better? (I'll go find one to QPQ now.) — OwenBlacker (talk; please {{ping}} me in replies) 20:34, 23 April 2018 (UTC)
- Template:Reply Okay that works better. Delving into this a little further I'm not fully sure of the hook's claim. Examining the sources does not backup the claim "...first person in the world to get a bionic prosthesis that is controlled by his neural signals":
- Article: "first patient in the world to undergo elective amputation and receive a bionic prosthesis"
- MB: "first person worldwide to receive a bionic hand prosthesis"
- DW: "Europe's first bionic hand" & "...a bionic hand powered by neural signals. The first man to get one..."
- BBC: "Patrick was the first patient in the world to choose to have his hand amputated"
- I therefore suggest the following ALT hooks:
- ALT0a: ... that Paralympic silver-medal winning snowboarder Patrick Mayrhofer was the first person in the world to get a bionic hand prosthesis that is controlled by his neural signals?
- ALT0b: ... that Paralympic silver-medal winning snowboarder Patrick Mayrhofer was the first person in the world to get a bionic hand prosthesis after an elective amputation?
- ALT0c: ... that Paralympic silver-medal winning snowboarder Patrick Mayrhofer was the first person in the world to undergo elective amputation and get a bionic prosthesis?
We're going to need a third party to look over these now - may as well get that started while you work on the QPQ. violet/riga [talk] 21:35, 23 April 2018 (UTC)
- Template:Reply Oh, good spot; thank you. I definitely prefer ALT0a of those 3, as the neural signals part is just freaking cool. It could be worth adding a link to Neural engineering to ALT0a; ALT0b and ALT0c could link to Elective surgery and Amputation. I've completed the QPQ now, here. Thanks again! — OwenBlacker (talk; please {{ping}} me in replies) 22:08, 23 April 2018 (UTC)
- Template:Reply Okay that works better. Delving into this a little further I'm not fully sure of the hook's claim. Examining the sources does not backup the claim "...first person in the world to get a bionic prosthesis that is controlled by his neural signals":
- Template:Reply I've tweaked the wording there — the change of "neural signals" to "nerve impulses" was me trying to simplify the wording of the hook. Is that better? (I'll go find one to QPQ now.) — OwenBlacker (talk; please {{ping}} me in replies) 20:34, 23 April 2018 (UTC)
- Template:Reply Sorry about that; I'd completely forgotten that I still had the QPQ outstanding and hadn't spotted that you had replied. Thanks for having {{ping}}ed me to bring it to my attention — I'll take a look over the weekend and {{ping}} you back. Thanks again! — OwenBlacker (talk; please {{ping}} me in replies) 09:23, 20 April 2018 (UTC)
- Template:Ping - are you planning to complete this nomination? violet/riga [talk] 07:40, 20 April 2018 (UTC)