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The result was: '''promoted''' by [[User:Cwmhiraeth|Cwmhiraeth]] ([[User talk:Cwmhiraeth|talk]]) 06:08, 20 January 2019 (UTC)<br />
 
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====Peter McAdams====
 
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* ... that '''[[Peter McAdams]]''' received the [[Medal of Honor]] for carrying his wounded comrade {{convert|250|yd}} while under fire?
 
* ... that '''[[Peter McAdams]]''' received the [[Medal of Honor]] for carrying his wounded comrade {{convert|250|yd}} while under fire?
 
** <s>'''ALT1''':... that '''[[Peter McAdams]]''' immediately requested permission to enter enemy lines to rescue his wounded comrade?</s>
 
** <s>'''ALT1''':... that '''[[Peter McAdams]]''' immediately requested permission to enter enemy lines to rescue his wounded comrade?</s>
 
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<small>Created by [[User:FiendYT|FiendYT]] ([[User talk:FiendYT|talk]]). Self-nominated at 18:00, 17 December 2018 (UTC).</small>
 
<small>Created by [[User:FiendYT|FiendYT]] ([[User talk:FiendYT|talk]]). Self-nominated at 18:00, 17 December 2018 (UTC).</small>
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:*Hi [[User:FiendYT|FiendYT]], review follows: article created 17 December; article exceeds minimum length; article is written well and cited inline throughout to reliable sources; I have added a lead to the article; I could not access the two main sources but am happy to AGF that there is no overly close paraphrasing from them; the first hook is mentioned in the article and referenced (I altered it slightly as the article made no mention of "heavy" fire) - AGF on sources; I have struck the second hook as the article makes no mention of "immediately" and without it there is no sense of the exceptional nature of the rescue; my preference is for the first hook anyway, context could be added by linking to [[Battle of Salem Church]]; QPQ has been carried out - [[User:Dumelow|Dumelow]] ([[User talk:Dumelow|talk]]) 10:25, 19 December 2018 (UTC)
 
:*Hi [[User:FiendYT|FiendYT]], review follows: article created 17 December; article exceeds minimum length; article is written well and cited inline throughout to reliable sources; I have added a lead to the article; I could not access the two main sources but am happy to AGF that there is no overly close paraphrasing from them; the first hook is mentioned in the article and referenced (I altered it slightly as the article made no mention of "heavy" fire) - AGF on sources; I have struck the second hook as the article makes no mention of "immediately" and without it there is no sense of the exceptional nature of the rescue; my preference is for the first hook anyway, context could be added by linking to [[Battle of Salem Church]]; QPQ has been carried out - [[User:Dumelow|Dumelow]] ([[User talk:Dumelow|talk]]) 10:25, 19 December 2018 (UTC)
 
::*Hello [[User:Dumelow|Dumelow]], how about '''ALT2''':... that '''[[Peter McAdams]]''' received the [[Medal of Honor]] for carrying his wounded comrade {{convert|250|yd}} while under fire during the [[Battle of Salem Church]]? Thanks! [[User:FiendYT|<span style="color: darker">FiendYT</span>]] [[User talk:FiendYT|<span style="color: lightblack">★</span>]] 16:20, 19 December 2018 (UTC)
 
::*Hello [[User:Dumelow|Dumelow]], how about '''ALT2''':... that '''[[Peter McAdams]]''' received the [[Medal of Honor]] for carrying his wounded comrade {{convert|250|yd}} while under fire during the [[Battle of Salem Church]]? Thanks! [[User:FiendYT|<span style="color: darker">FiendYT</span>]] [[User talk:FiendYT|<span style="color: lightblack">★</span>]] 16:20, 19 December 2018 (UTC)
:::[[File:Symbol voting keep.svg|16px]] Thanks [[User:FiendYT|FiendYT]], both ALT2 and ALT0 are approved - [[User:Dumelow|Dumelow]] ([[User talk:Dumelow|talk]]) 18:09, 19 December 2018 (UTC)
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Latest revision as of 06:08, 20 January 2019

The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 06:08, 20 January 2019 (UTC)

Peter McAdams

  • ... that Peter McAdams received the Medal of Honor for carrying his wounded comrade 250 yards (230 m) while under fire?
    • ALT1:... that Peter McAdams immediately requested permission to enter enemy lines to rescue his wounded comrade?

Created by FiendYT (talk). Self-nominated at 18:00, 17 December 2018 (UTC).

  • Hi FiendYT, review follows: article created 17 December; article exceeds minimum length; article is written well and cited inline throughout to reliable sources; I have added a lead to the article; I could not access the two main sources but am happy to AGF that there is no overly close paraphrasing from them; the first hook is mentioned in the article and referenced (I altered it slightly as the article made no mention of "heavy" fire) - AGF on sources; I have struck the second hook as the article makes no mention of "immediately" and without it there is no sense of the exceptional nature of the rescue; my preference is for the first hook anyway, context could be added by linking to Battle of Salem Church; QPQ has been carried out - Dumelow (talk) 10:25, 19 December 2018 (UTC)
Symbol voting keep.svg Thanks FiendYT, both ALT2 and ALT0 are approved - Dumelow (talk) 18:09, 19 December 2018 (UTC)