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| − | * ... that '''[[preoperative care]]''' for minor [[Cardiac surgery|heart surgery]] does not usually include [[cardiac imaging]]? | + | * <s>... that '''[[preoperative care]]''' for minor [[Cardiac surgery|heart surgery]] does not usually include [[cardiac imaging]]?</s> |
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| − | :* '''ALT1''':... that people who have minor [[Cardiac surgery|heart surgery]] usually do not have [[cardiac imaging]] during '''[[preoperative care]]'''? | + | :* '''ALT1''':<s>... that people who have minor [[Cardiac surgery|heart surgery]] usually do not have [[cardiac imaging]] during '''[[preoperative care]]'''?</s> |
:* ''Reviewed'': [[Template:Did you know nominations/Krishnalal Shridharani|Krishnalal Shridharani]] | :* ''Reviewed'': [[Template:Did you know nominations/Krishnalal Shridharani|Krishnalal Shridharani]] | ||
:* ''Comment'': I work for a health organization and made this article in the course of my job duties described at [[WP:Choosing Wisely]]. It is my opinion that this article and hook are presenting noncontroversial health information of general interest. | :* ''Comment'': I work for a health organization and made this article in the course of my job duties described at [[WP:Choosing Wisely]]. It is my opinion that this article and hook are presenting noncontroversial health information of general interest. | ||
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*[[File:Symbol possible vote.svg|16px]] I've re-opened this and puled it from the queue. What the article says is "Cardiac imaging and cardiac stress tests are usually unnecessary for people who do not have a serious heart condition '''''and who are having surgery unrelated to the heart''''' (my emphasis), not that cardiac imaging is unnecessary for minor heart surgery. [[User:HJ Mitchell|<font color="Teal" face="Tahoma">'''HJ Mitchell'''</font>]] | [[User talk:HJ Mitchell|<font color="Navy" face= "Times New Roman">Penny for your thoughts? </font>]] 15:42, 10 October 2014 (UTC) | *[[File:Symbol possible vote.svg|16px]] I've re-opened this and puled it from the queue. What the article says is "Cardiac imaging and cardiac stress tests are usually unnecessary for people who do not have a serious heart condition '''''and who are having surgery unrelated to the heart''''' (my emphasis), not that cardiac imaging is unnecessary for minor heart surgery. [[User:HJ Mitchell|<font color="Teal" face="Tahoma">'''HJ Mitchell'''</font>]] | [[User talk:HJ Mitchell|<font color="Navy" face= "Times New Roman">Penny for your thoughts? </font>]] 15:42, 10 October 2014 (UTC) | ||
:It looks like the hook has been corrected to reflect the source better. [[User:Daniel Case|Daniel Case]] ([[User talk:Daniel Case|talk]]) 15:55, 10 October 2014 (UTC) | :It looks like the hook has been corrected to reflect the source better. [[User:Daniel Case|Daniel Case]] ([[User talk:Daniel Case|talk]]) 15:55, 10 October 2014 (UTC) | ||
| + | ::Oh, no! I made a mistake, and I see why it was missed in the first check, no fault of {{u|Daniel Case}}. ((u|HJ Mitchell}} is right! Here is a new version: | ||
| + | ::* '''ALT2''': ...[[cardiac imaging]] during '''[[preoperative care]]''' is usually not useful for patients having minor surgeries unrelated to the heart? | ||
| + | ::* '''ALT2''': ...people who have surgery unrelated to the heart typically do not need [[cardiac imaging]] in their '''[[preoperative care]]'''? | ||
| + | ::It would have been embarrassing to have let that mistake through. Thanks for catching it. [[User:Bluerasberry|<span style="background:#cedff2;color:#11e">''' Blue Rasberry '''</span>]][[User talk:Bluerasberry|<span style="background:#cedff2;color:#11e">(talk)</span>]] 17:29, 10 October 2014 (UTC) | ||
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Preoperative care
... that preoperative care for minor heart surgery does not usually include cardiac imaging?
- ALT1:
... that people who have minor heart surgery usually do not have cardiac imaging during preoperative care? - Reviewed: Krishnalal Shridharani
- Comment: I work for a health organization and made this article in the course of my job duties described at WP:Choosing Wisely. It is my opinion that this article and hook are presenting noncontroversial health information of general interest.
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Created/expanded by Bluerasberry (talk). Self nominated at 16:51, 3 September 2014 (UTC).
Length, history and reference verified. Daniel Case (talk) 04:01, 10 October 2014 (UTC)
- 16px I've re-opened this and puled it from the queue. What the article says is "Cardiac imaging and cardiac stress tests are usually unnecessary for people who do not have a serious heart condition and who are having surgery unrelated to the heart (my emphasis), not that cardiac imaging is unnecessary for minor heart surgery. HJ Mitchell | Penny for your thoughts? 15:42, 10 October 2014 (UTC)
- It looks like the hook has been corrected to reflect the source better. Daniel Case (talk) 15:55, 10 October 2014 (UTC)
- Oh, no! I made a mistake, and I see why it was missed in the first check, no fault of Template:U. ((u is right! Here is a new version:
- ALT2: ...cardiac imaging during preoperative care is usually not useful for patients having minor surgeries unrelated to the heart?
- ALT2: ...people who have surgery unrelated to the heart typically do not need cardiac imaging in their preoperative care?
- It would have been embarrassing to have let that mistake through. Thanks for catching it. Blue Rasberry (talk) 17:29, 10 October 2014 (UTC)
- Oh, no! I made a mistake, and I see why it was missed in the first check, no fault of Template:U. ((u is right! Here is a new version:
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