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imported>Daniel Case
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* ... that '''[[preoperative care]]''' for minor [[Cardiac surgery|heart surgery]] does not usually include [[cardiac imaging]]?
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* <s>... that '''[[preoperative care]]''' for minor [[Cardiac surgery|heart surgery]] does not usually include [[cardiac imaging]]?</s>
 
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:* '''ALT1''':... that people who have minor [[Cardiac surgery|heart surgery]] usually do not have [[cardiac imaging]] during '''[[preoperative care]]'''?
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:* '''ALT1''':<s>... that people who have minor [[Cardiac surgery|heart surgery]] usually do not have [[cardiac imaging]] during '''[[preoperative care]]'''?</s>
 
:* ''Reviewed'': [[Template:Did you know nominations/Krishnalal Shridharani|Krishnalal Shridharani]]
 
:* ''Reviewed'': [[Template:Did you know nominations/Krishnalal Shridharani|Krishnalal Shridharani]]
 
:* ''Comment'': I work for a health organization and made this article in the course of my job duties described at [[WP:Choosing Wisely]]. It is my opinion that this article and hook are presenting noncontroversial health information of general interest.
 
:* ''Comment'': I work for a health organization and made this article in the course of my job duties described at [[WP:Choosing Wisely]]. It is my opinion that this article and hook are presenting noncontroversial health information of general interest.
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*[[File:Symbol possible vote.svg|16px]] I've re-opened this and puled it from the queue. What the article says is "Cardiac imaging and cardiac stress tests are usually unnecessary for people who do not have a serious heart condition '''''and who are having surgery unrelated to the heart''''' (my emphasis), not that cardiac imaging is unnecessary for minor heart surgery. [[User:HJ Mitchell|<font color="Teal" face="Tahoma">'''HJ&nbsp;Mitchell'''</font>]] &#124; [[User talk:HJ Mitchell|<font color="Navy" face= "Times New Roman">Penny for your thoughts? </font>]] 15:42, 10 October 2014 (UTC)
 
*[[File:Symbol possible vote.svg|16px]] I've re-opened this and puled it from the queue. What the article says is "Cardiac imaging and cardiac stress tests are usually unnecessary for people who do not have a serious heart condition '''''and who are having surgery unrelated to the heart''''' (my emphasis), not that cardiac imaging is unnecessary for minor heart surgery. [[User:HJ Mitchell|<font color="Teal" face="Tahoma">'''HJ&nbsp;Mitchell'''</font>]] &#124; [[User talk:HJ Mitchell|<font color="Navy" face= "Times New Roman">Penny for your thoughts? </font>]] 15:42, 10 October 2014 (UTC)
 
:It looks like the hook has been corrected to reflect the source better. [[User:Daniel Case|Daniel Case]] ([[User talk:Daniel Case|talk]]) 15:55, 10 October 2014 (UTC)
 
:It looks like the hook has been corrected to reflect the source better. [[User:Daniel Case|Daniel Case]] ([[User talk:Daniel Case|talk]]) 15:55, 10 October 2014 (UTC)
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::Oh, no! I made a mistake, and I see why it was missed in the first check, no fault of {{u|Daniel Case}}. ((u|HJ Mitchell}} is right! Here is a new version:
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::* '''ALT2''': ...[[cardiac imaging]] during '''[[preoperative care]]''' is usually not useful for patients having minor surgeries unrelated to the heart?
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::* '''ALT2''': ...people who have surgery unrelated to the heart typically do not need [[cardiac imaging]] in their '''[[preoperative care]]'''?
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::It would have been embarrassing to have let that mistake through. Thanks for catching it. [[User:Bluerasberry|<span style="background:#cedff2;color:#11e">''' Blue Rasberry '''</span>]][[User talk:Bluerasberry|<span style="background:#cedff2;color:#11e">(talk)</span>]] 17:29, 10 October 2014 (UTC)
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Revision as of 17:29, 10 October 2014

Preoperative care

Created/expanded by Bluerasberry (talk). Self nominated at 16:51, 3 September 2014 (UTC).

Symbol confirmed.svg Length, history and reference verified. Daniel Case (talk) 04:01, 10 October 2014 (UTC)
  • 16px I've re-opened this and puled it from the queue. What the article says is "Cardiac imaging and cardiac stress tests are usually unnecessary for people who do not have a serious heart condition and who are having surgery unrelated to the heart (my emphasis), not that cardiac imaging is unnecessary for minor heart surgery. HJ Mitchell | Penny for your thoughts? 15:42, 10 October 2014 (UTC)
It looks like the hook has been corrected to reflect the source better. Daniel Case (talk) 15:55, 10 October 2014 (UTC)
Oh, no! I made a mistake, and I see why it was missed in the first check, no fault of Template:U. ((u is right! Here is a new version:
It would have been embarrassing to have let that mistake through. Thanks for catching it. Blue Rasberry (talk) 17:29, 10 October 2014 (UTC)

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