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:::*[[File:Symbol voting keep.svg|16px]] New hook is fine (better even). Rest of the article looks up to snuff, per Drmies. — [[User:Crisco 1492|Crisco 1492]] ([[User talk:Crisco 1492|talk]]) 05:06, 28 August 2013 (UTC)
 
:::*[[File:Symbol voting keep.svg|16px]] New hook is fine (better even). Rest of the article looks up to snuff, per Drmies. — [[User:Crisco 1492|Crisco 1492]] ([[User talk:Crisco 1492|talk]]) 05:06, 28 August 2013 (UTC)
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:::::Thanks for reviewing it, Crisco 1492. --[[User:1ST7|1ST7]] ([[User talk:1ST7|talk]]) 05:20, 28 August 2013 (UTC)
 
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:::::Thanks for reviewing it, Crisco 1492. --[[User:1ST7|1ST7]] ([[User talk:1ST7|talk]]) 05:20, 28 August 2013 (UTC)
 

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Prisoners of Hope

  • ... that American aid workers Heather Mercer and Dayna Curry's memoir, Prisoners of Hope, recounts that during their 2001 imprisonment by the Taliban, the prison cells were so infested with flies that they killed around 150 every day?

Created by 1ST7 (talk). Self nominated at 05:21, 27 August 2013 (UTC).

  • Symbol question.svg Long enough, new enough. Found no plagiarism. Good work. But the hook is on the long side, and would suggest cutting it a bit; see below. Drmies (talk) 17:58, 27 August 2013 (UTC)
Thanks for the review! I agree with you about the wording; the second version is better. --1ST7 (talk) 00:10, 28 August 2013 (UTC)
  • Symbol voting keep.svg New hook is fine (better even). Rest of the article looks up to snuff, per Drmies. — Crisco 1492 (talk) 05:06, 28 August 2013 (UTC)
Thanks for reviewing it, Crisco 1492. --1ST7 (talk) 05:20, 28 August 2013 (UTC)