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::*[[File:Symbol possible vote.svg|16px]] Returned from prep. There is no inline citation after the sentence containing the hook fact (ALT0), and it's unclear if the source given on this nomination is talking about the first study in India or the first time people got vitamin D deficiency. [[User:Yoninah|Yoninah]] ([[User talk:Yoninah|talk]]) 11:01, 12 April 2017 (UTC) | ::*[[File:Symbol possible vote.svg|16px]] Returned from prep. There is no inline citation after the sentence containing the hook fact (ALT0), and it's unclear if the source given on this nomination is talking about the first study in India or the first time people got vitamin D deficiency. [[User:Yoninah|Yoninah]] ([[User talk:Yoninah|talk]]) 11:01, 12 April 2017 (UTC) | ||
::: {{ping|Yoninah|Argento Surfer}} Inline citation provided (the previous sentence had the citation and the facts mentioned here also refers to that citation). Vitamin deficiency must have been in India from time immemorial. I feel it would too much to ask if the source is mentioning about ''first time people got vitamin D deficiency'' in India. If that was the case, it would still only be revealed through a study. ''His research work has documented the prevalence, significance and causes of vitamin D deficiency in apparently healthy individuals for the first time in India''. It is talking about the first time study and documentation of the problem. The following link (available as reference in the article) also talks about the study. [http://timesofindia.indiatimes.com/india/Sunlight-enough-no-need-of-vitamin-D-drive/articleshow/51624685.cms Sunlight enough, no need of vitamin-D drive]. Trust I have clarified. [[User:Tachs|jojo@nthony]] ([[User talk:Tachs|talk]]) 11:24, 12 April 2017 (UTC) | ::: {{ping|Yoninah|Argento Surfer}} Inline citation provided (the previous sentence had the citation and the facts mentioned here also refers to that citation). Vitamin deficiency must have been in India from time immemorial. I feel it would too much to ask if the source is mentioning about ''first time people got vitamin D deficiency'' in India. If that was the case, it would still only be revealed through a study. ''His research work has documented the prevalence, significance and causes of vitamin D deficiency in apparently healthy individuals for the first time in India''. It is talking about the first time study and documentation of the problem. The following link (available as reference in the article) also talks about the study. [http://timesofindia.indiatimes.com/india/Sunlight-enough-no-need-of-vitamin-D-drive/articleshow/51624685.cms Sunlight enough, no need of vitamin-D drive]. Trust I have clarified. [[User:Tachs|jojo@nthony]] ([[User talk:Tachs|talk]]) 11:24, 12 April 2017 (UTC) | ||
+ | ::::*[[File:Symbol confirmed.svg|16px]] OK, thanks. Restoring tick per Argento Surfer's review. [[User:Yoninah|Yoninah]] ([[User talk:Yoninah|talk]]) 14:38, 12 April 2017 (UTC) | ||
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Ravinder Goswami
- ... that Ravinder Goswami carried out studies on vitamin D deficiency which was the first such study in India? Source: Shanti Swarup Bhatnagar Prize citation
- ALT1:... that Ravinder Goswami, through his studies on vitamin D deficiency in India, established that the dark skin of the indigenous population could be the reason for the disorder? Source: Hindustan Times newsreport, Times of India newreport
Created by Tachs (talk). Self-nominated at 18:36, 3 April 2017 (UTC).
New enough, long enough, within policy (high results on earwig are from article names and authors). Both hooks are short enough. ALT0 would read better rephrased as "Ravinder Goswami was the first researcher to study vitamin D deficiency in India" I prefer ALT1. QPQ was reviewed by User:Tachs, who is using the signature "jojo@nthony" Argento Surfer (talk) 13:56, 4 April 2017 (UTC)
Returned from prep. There is no inline citation after the sentence containing the hook fact (ALT0), and it's unclear if the source given on this nomination is talking about the first study in India or the first time people got vitamin D deficiency. Yoninah (talk) 11:01, 12 April 2017 (UTC)
- Template:Ping Inline citation provided (the previous sentence had the citation and the facts mentioned here also refers to that citation). Vitamin deficiency must have been in India from time immemorial. I feel it would too much to ask if the source is mentioning about first time people got vitamin D deficiency in India. If that was the case, it would still only be revealed through a study. His research work has documented the prevalence, significance and causes of vitamin D deficiency in apparently healthy individuals for the first time in India. It is talking about the first time study and documentation of the problem. The following link (available as reference in the article) also talks about the study. Sunlight enough, no need of vitamin-D drive. Trust I have clarified. jojo@nthony (talk) 11:24, 12 April 2017 (UTC)