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| + | *I just don't think the proposed hook is very sexy. Mightn't {{tq|"''… that the last Polish '''[[red złoty]]''' were the so-called "insurgent ducats" minted at the [[Warsaw mint]] in 1831, on the eve of the [[November Uprising]]?''"}} be better calculated to catch the reader's interest, with flammable words like "insurgent" and "uprising"? [[User:Bishonen|Bishonen]] | [[User talk:Bishonen|talk]] 23:49, 2 April 2013 (UTC). | ||
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Red złoty
- ... that red złoty (pictured) were the gold coins minted in Poland from the 1320s to 1831?
- Reviewed: Penn Symons
Created by Piotrus (talk). Self nominated at 07:11, 14 March 2013 (UTC).
- I'm making some copy edits and left you a question in the edit summaries. I think you should removed the dates from the book templates and leave only the year, and reference 5's title needs tweaking--I think the name of the publication is part of the title. Drmies (talk) 18:50, 14 March 2013 (UTC)
- Fixed minor items, replied on talk. --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here 04:50, 15 March 2013 (UTC)
- OK, but now the burden is the "1320s" in the hook: I don't see that the article says that those coins (before 1526, I suppose) were called red zloty. If I read this correctly it seems that they were introduced as part of a monetary reform begun in the 1320s--is that correct? If so, the article should identify our coin more clearly in its early stages. Drmies (talk) 14:36, 15 March 2013 (UTC)
- The source does call these coins red zloty: Dukat Łokietka, przedstawiony tu w rysunku, jest zatem pierwszym "czerwonym złotym" polskim. - "The Ducat of Lokietek (Wladyslaw), shown in the illustration, is then the first Polish "red zloty"". I guess it's in quotation marks though. I do think a more involved hook would be good.Volunteer Marek 18:18, 17 March 2013 (UTC)
Full review needed. BlueMoonset (talk) 05:36, 26 March 2013 (UTC)
- I just don't think the proposed hook is very sexy. Mightn't Template:Tq be better calculated to catch the reader's interest, with flammable words like "insurgent" and "uprising"? Bishonen | talk 23:49, 2 April 2013 (UTC).