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:*Regarding the hooks, it took me a while to figure out what the first hook is saying until I read the article. (Not good for a hook.) ALT1 is easier, but I think it's talking about the wrong book. It would help to identify her as a {{tq|Welsh novelist}} in the hook. QPQ done. [[User:Yoninah|Yoninah]] ([[User talk:Yoninah|talk]]) 20:01, 22 June 2020 (UTC) | :*Regarding the hooks, it took me a while to figure out what the first hook is saying until I read the article. (Not good for a hook.) ALT1 is easier, but I think it's talking about the wrong book. It would help to identify her as a {{tq|Welsh novelist}} in the hook. QPQ done. [[User:Yoninah|Yoninah]] ([[User talk:Yoninah|talk]]) 20:01, 22 June 2020 (UTC) | ||
**{{reply|Yoninah}} I do not wish to proceed further with this. [[User:MWright96|MWright96]] [[User talk:MWright96|(talk)]] 05:04, 23 June 2020 (UTC) | **{{reply|Yoninah}} I do not wish to proceed further with this. [[User:MWright96|MWright96]] [[User talk:MWright96|(talk)]] 05:04, 23 June 2020 (UTC) | ||
| + | ::*[[File:Symbol delete vote.svg|16px]] OK. Withdrawn by nominator. [[User:Yoninah|Yoninah]] ([[User talk:Yoninah|talk]]) 10:46, 23 June 2020 (UTC) | ||
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Rhiannon Davies Jones
- ... that novelist Rhiannon Davies Jones wrote Eryr Pengwern in response to Gwynfor Evans' hunger strike threat for a Welsh television channel? Source: Jones, Sarah Rhiannon Davies (1921 – 2014), author and lecturer": Dictionary of Welsh Biography
- ALT1:... that novelist Rhiannon Davies Jones was inspired to write Lleian Llan Llŷr from the Investiture of the Prince of Wales and the deaths of two young activists in Abergele? Source: Rhiannon Davies Jones: Welsh-language author whose impassioned historical novels carried a nationalist message: The Independent
Created by MWright96 (talk). Self-nominated at 12:09, 26 May 2020 (UTC).
New enough, long enough, neutrally written, well referenced. There is a little close paraphrasing in your ALT1 hook; surely you can rewrite Template:Tq, perhaps indicating they died from their own bomb. In general, the writing in this article is very dense, much more difficult to read than your usual articles.- Regarding the hooks, it took me a while to figure out what the first hook is saying until I read the article. (Not good for a hook.) ALT1 is easier, but I think it's talking about the wrong book. It would help to identify her as a Template:Tq in the hook. QPQ done. Yoninah (talk) 20:01, 22 June 2020 (UTC)
- Template:Reply I do not wish to proceed further with this. MWright96 (talk) 05:04, 23 June 2020 (UTC)