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The result was: '''withdrawn by nominator''', closed by [[User:Narutolovehinata5|Narutolovehinata5]] ([[User talk:Narutolovehinata5|talk]])&nbsp;06:55, 24 June 2020 (UTC)<br />
 
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* ... that novelist '''[[Rhiannon Davies Jones]]''' wrote ''Eryr Pengwern'' in response to [[Gwynfor Evans]]' hunger strike threat for a Welsh television channel? <small>Source: [https://biography.wales/article/s12-JONE-DAV-1921#?c=0&m=0&s=0&cv=30&manifest=https%3A%2F%2Fdamsssl.llgc.org.uk%2Fiiif%2F2.0%2F4635494%2Fmanifest.json&xywh=-93%2C685%2C4352%2C358 Jones, Sarah Rhiannon Davies (1921 – 2014), author and lecturer": Dictionary of Welsh Biography]</small>
 
* ... that novelist '''[[Rhiannon Davies Jones]]''' wrote ''Eryr Pengwern'' in response to [[Gwynfor Evans]]' hunger strike threat for a Welsh television channel? <small>Source: [https://biography.wales/article/s12-JONE-DAV-1921#?c=0&m=0&s=0&cv=30&manifest=https%3A%2F%2Fdamsssl.llgc.org.uk%2Fiiif%2F2.0%2F4635494%2Fmanifest.json&xywh=-93%2C685%2C4352%2C358 Jones, Sarah Rhiannon Davies (1921 – 2014), author and lecturer": Dictionary of Welsh Biography]</small>
 
** '''ALT1''':... that novelist '''[[Rhiannon Davies Jones]]''' was inspired to write ''Lleian Llan Llŷr'' from the [[Investiture of the Prince of Wales]] and the deaths of two young activists in [[Abergele]]? <small>Source: [https://www.independent.co.uk/news/people/rhiannon-davies-jones-celebrated-welsh-language-author-whose-impassioned-historical-novels-carried-a-9824182.html Rhiannon Davies Jones: Welsh-language author whose impassioned historical novels carried a nationalist message: The Independent]</small>
 
** '''ALT1''':... that novelist '''[[Rhiannon Davies Jones]]''' was inspired to write ''Lleian Llan Llŷr'' from the [[Investiture of the Prince of Wales]] and the deaths of two young activists in [[Abergele]]? <small>Source: [https://www.independent.co.uk/news/people/rhiannon-davies-jones-celebrated-welsh-language-author-whose-impassioned-historical-novels-carried-a-9824182.html Rhiannon Davies Jones: Welsh-language author whose impassioned historical novels carried a nationalist message: The Independent]</small>
 
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:* ''Reviewed'': [[Template:Did you know nominations/Henrietta Garnett]]
 
<small>Created by [[User:MWright96|MWright96]] ([[User talk:MWright96|talk]]). Self-nominated at 12:09, 26 May 2020 (UTC).</small>
 
<small>Created by [[User:MWright96|MWright96]] ([[User talk:MWright96|talk]]). Self-nominated at 12:09, 26 May 2020 (UTC).</small>
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:* [[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]] New enough, long enough, neutrally written, well referenced. There is a little close paraphrasing in your ALT1 hook; surely you can rewrite {{tq|the deaths of two young activists}}, perhaps indicating they died from their own bomb. In general, the writing in this article is very dense, much more difficult to read than your usual articles.
 
:* [[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]] New enough, long enough, neutrally written, well referenced. There is a little close paraphrasing in your ALT1 hook; surely you can rewrite {{tq|the deaths of two young activists}}, perhaps indicating they died from their own bomb. In general, the writing in this article is very dense, much more difficult to read than your usual articles.
 
:*Regarding the hooks, it took me a while to figure out what the first hook is saying until I read the article. (Not good for a hook.) ALT1 is easier, but I think it's talking about the wrong book. It would help to identify her as a {{tq|Welsh novelist}} in the hook. QPQ done. [[User:Yoninah|Yoninah]] ([[User talk:Yoninah|talk]]) 20:01, 22 June 2020 (UTC)
 
:*Regarding the hooks, it took me a while to figure out what the first hook is saying until I read the article. (Not good for a hook.) ALT1 is easier, but I think it's talking about the wrong book. It would help to identify her as a {{tq|Welsh novelist}} in the hook. QPQ done. [[User:Yoninah|Yoninah]] ([[User talk:Yoninah|talk]]) 20:01, 22 June 2020 (UTC)
 
**{{reply|Yoninah}} I do not wish to proceed further with this. [[User:MWright96|MWright96]] [[User talk:MWright96|(talk)]] 05:04, 23 June 2020 (UTC)
 
**{{reply|Yoninah}} I do not wish to proceed further with this. [[User:MWright96|MWright96]] [[User talk:MWright96|(talk)]] 05:04, 23 June 2020 (UTC)
::*[[File:Symbol delete vote.svg|16px]] OK. Withdrawn by nominator. [[User:Yoninah|Yoninah]] ([[User talk:Yoninah|talk]]) 10:46, 23 June 2020 (UTC)
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Revision as of 06:55, 24 June 2020

The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: withdrawn by nominator, closed by Narutolovehinata5 (talk) 06:55, 24 June 2020 (UTC)

Rhiannon Davies Jones

Created by MWright96 (talk). Self-nominated at 12:09, 26 May 2020 (UTC).

  • Symbol question.svg New enough, long enough, neutrally written, well referenced. There is a little close paraphrasing in your ALT1 hook; surely you can rewrite Template:Tq, perhaps indicating they died from their own bomb. In general, the writing in this article is very dense, much more difficult to read than your usual articles.
  • Regarding the hooks, it took me a while to figure out what the first hook is saying until I read the article. (Not good for a hook.) ALT1 is easier, but I think it's talking about the wrong book. It would help to identify her as a Template:Tq in the hook. QPQ done. Yoninah (talk) 20:01, 22 June 2020 (UTC)
  • Symbol delete vote.svg OK. Withdrawn by nominator. Yoninah (talk) 10:46, 23 June 2020 (UTC)