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The result was: '''withdrawn by nominator''', closed by [[User:Narutolovehinata5|Narutolovehinata5]] ([[User talk:Narutolovehinata5|talk]])&nbsp;06:55, 24 June 2020 (UTC)<br />
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:*Regarding the hooks, it took me a while to figure out what the first hook is saying until I read the article. (Not good for a hook.) ALT1 is easier, but I think it's talking about the wrong book. It would help to identify her as a {{tq|Welsh novelist}} in the hook. QPQ done. [[User:Yoninah|Yoninah]] ([[User talk:Yoninah|talk]]) 20:01, 22 June 2020 (UTC)
 
:*Regarding the hooks, it took me a while to figure out what the first hook is saying until I read the article. (Not good for a hook.) ALT1 is easier, but I think it's talking about the wrong book. It would help to identify her as a {{tq|Welsh novelist}} in the hook. QPQ done. [[User:Yoninah|Yoninah]] ([[User talk:Yoninah|talk]]) 20:01, 22 June 2020 (UTC)
 
**{{reply|Yoninah}} I do not wish to proceed further with this. [[User:MWright96|MWright96]] [[User talk:MWright96|(talk)]] 05:04, 23 June 2020 (UTC)
 
**{{reply|Yoninah}} I do not wish to proceed further with this. [[User:MWright96|MWright96]] [[User talk:MWright96|(talk)]] 05:04, 23 June 2020 (UTC)
::*[[File:Symbol delete vote.svg|16px]] OK. Withdrawn by nominator. [[User:Yoninah|Yoninah]] ([[User talk:Yoninah|talk]]) 10:46, 23 June 2020 (UTC)</div><includeonly>|}}</includeonly><!--Please do not write below this line or remove this line. Place comments above this line.-->
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<small>Created by [[User:MWright96|MWright96]] ([[User talk:MWright96|talk]]). Self-nominated at 12:09, 26 May 2020 (UTC).</small>

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Rhiannon Davies Jones

Created by MWright96 (talk). Self-nominated at 12:09, 26 May 2020 (UTC).

  • Symbol question.svg New enough, long enough, neutrally written, well referenced. There is a little close paraphrasing in your ALT1 hook; surely you can rewrite Template:Tq, perhaps indicating they died from their own bomb. In general, the writing in this article is very dense, much more difficult to read than your usual articles.
  • Regarding the hooks, it took me a while to figure out what the first hook is saying until I read the article. (Not good for a hook.) ALT1 is easier, but I think it's talking about the wrong book. It would help to identify her as a Template:Tq in the hook. QPQ done. Yoninah (talk) 20:01, 22 June 2020 (UTC)

Created by MWright96 (talk). Self-nominated at 12:09, 26 May 2020 (UTC).