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:*Thanks for the review. I've added your suggestions and struck the other hooks. [[User:Morgan695|Morgan695]] ([[User talk:Morgan695|talk]]) 00:44, 1 November 2019 (UTC)
 
:*Thanks for the review. I've added your suggestions and struck the other hooks. [[User:Morgan695|Morgan695]] ([[User talk:Morgan695|talk]]) 00:44, 1 November 2019 (UTC)
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::*[[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]] ALT2 is not going to be acceptable because it violates [[WP:DYKSG#C6|Rule C6]], and it just tells the plot. Every creative work has a hooky plot. You could shorten ALT0, or pipe the link in ALT1 as follows:
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::*'''ALT1a''': ... that '''''[[Sarazanmai]]''''' was conceived as a series about [[yōkai|supernatural monsters]] for an adult audience?
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::*Or you could suggest something else. Thanks, [[User:Yoninah|Yoninah]] ([[User talk:Yoninah|talk]]) 22:56, 28 November 2019 (UTC)
  
 
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Revision as of 22:56, 28 November 2019

Sarazanmai

Improved to Good Article status by Morgan695 (talk). Self-nominated at 14:48, 31 October 2019 (UTC).

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  • Thanks for the review. I've added your suggestions and struck the other hooks. Morgan695 (talk) 00:44, 1 November 2019 (UTC)
  • Symbol question.svg ALT2 is not going to be acceptable because it violates Rule C6, and it just tells the plot. Every creative work has a hooky plot. You could shorten ALT0, or pipe the link in ALT1 as follows:
  • ALT1a: ... that Sarazanmai was conceived as a series about supernatural monsters for an adult audience?
  • Or you could suggest something else. Thanks, Yoninah (talk) 22:56, 28 November 2019 (UTC)