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* <s>... that when pitching '''''[[Sarazanmai]]''''', the series' director omitted elements of its plot to improve its chances of being greenlit – notably the centrality of ''[[Kappa (folklore)#As a menace|shirikodama]]'', a ball in Japanese folklore located in the anus? <small>Source: [https://www.animenewsnetwork.com/interest/2019-04-25/sarazanmai-anime-pitch-did-not-mention-butts/.146112?fbclid=IwAR1M_VwXCERUaIg3EXmc4TCXWAWmA3W77fdSzVkzs5z2Cbe6M2jfSsoqfkg Anime News Network]</small></s> | * <s>... that when pitching '''''[[Sarazanmai]]''''', the series' director omitted elements of its plot to improve its chances of being greenlit – notably the centrality of ''[[Kappa (folklore)#As a menace|shirikodama]]'', a ball in Japanese folklore located in the anus? <small>Source: [https://www.animenewsnetwork.com/interest/2019-04-25/sarazanmai-anime-pitch-did-not-mention-butts/.146112?fbclid=IwAR1M_VwXCERUaIg3EXmc4TCXWAWmA3W77fdSzVkzs5z2Cbe6M2jfSsoqfkg Anime News Network]</small></s> | ||
** <s>'''ALT1''':... that '''''[[Sarazanmai]]''''' was conceived as a series about ''[[yōkai]]'' (supernatural monsters) for an adult audience? <small>Source: [https://www.pashplus.jp/report/115593/?body_dsp=1 Pash! Plus (in Japanese)]</small></s> | ** <s>'''ALT1''':... that '''''[[Sarazanmai]]''''' was conceived as a series about ''[[yōkai]]'' (supernatural monsters) for an adult audience? <small>Source: [https://www.pashplus.jp/report/115593/?body_dsp=1 Pash! Plus (in Japanese)]</small></s> | ||
| − | ** '''ALT2''':... that '''''[[Sarazanmai]]''''' is a television series about a [[shirikodama|mythical ball]] located in the [[anus]]? <small>Source: [https://www.animenewsnetwork.com/interest/2019-04-25/sarazanmai-anime-pitch-did-not-mention-butts/.146112?fbclid=IwAR1M_VwXCERUaIg3EXmc4TCXWAWmA3W77fdSzVkzs5z2Cbe6M2jfSsoqfkg Anime News Network]</small> | + | ** '''ALT2''':<s>... that '''''[[Sarazanmai]]''''' is a television series about a [[shirikodama|mythical ball]] located in the [[anus]]?</s> <small>Source: [https://www.animenewsnetwork.com/interest/2019-04-25/sarazanmai-anime-pitch-did-not-mention-butts/.146112?fbclid=IwAR1M_VwXCERUaIg3EXmc4TCXWAWmA3W77fdSzVkzs5z2Cbe6M2jfSsoqfkg Anime News Network]</small> |
:* ''Reviewed'': [[Template:Did you know nominations/Gateway of India|Gateway of India]] | :* ''Reviewed'': [[Template:Did you know nominations/Gateway of India|Gateway of India]] | ||
<small>Improved to Good Article status by [[User:Morgan695|Morgan695]] ([[User talk:Morgan695|talk]]). Self-nominated at 14:48, 31 October 2019 (UTC).</small> | <small>Improved to Good Article status by [[User:Morgan695|Morgan695]] ([[User talk:Morgan695|talk]]). Self-nominated at 14:48, 31 October 2019 (UTC).</small> | ||
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::*Or you could suggest something else. Thanks, [[User:Yoninah|Yoninah]] ([[User talk:Yoninah|talk]]) 22:56, 28 November 2019 (UTC) | ::*Or you could suggest something else. Thanks, [[User:Yoninah|Yoninah]] ([[User talk:Yoninah|talk]]) 22:56, 28 November 2019 (UTC) | ||
:::*ALT1a works for me. [[User:Morgan695|Morgan695]] ([[User talk:Morgan695|talk]]) 23:39, 28 November 2019 (UTC) | :::*ALT1a works for me. [[User:Morgan695|Morgan695]] ([[User talk:Morgan695|talk]]) 23:39, 28 November 2019 (UTC) | ||
| − | + | ::::*[[File:Symbol redirect vote 4.svg|16px]] Thanks. {{ping|SounderBruce}} did your review cover ALT1? [[User:Yoninah|Yoninah]] ([[User talk:Yoninah|talk]]) 23:40, 28 November 2019 (UTC) | |
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Sarazanmai
... that when pitching Sarazanmai, the series' director omitted elements of its plot to improve its chances of being greenlit – notably the centrality of shirikodama, a ball in Japanese folklore located in the anus? Source: Anime News NetworkALT1:... that Sarazanmai was conceived as a series about yōkai (supernatural monsters) for an adult audience? Source: Pash! Plus (in Japanese)- ALT2:
... that Sarazanmai is a television series about a mythical ball located in the anus?Source: Anime News Network
- Reviewed: Gateway of India
Improved to Good Article status by Morgan695 (talk). Self-nominated at 14:48, 31 October 2019 (UTC).
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- Thanks for the review. I've added your suggestions and struck the other hooks. Morgan695 (talk) 00:44, 1 November 2019 (UTC)
ALT2 is not going to be acceptable because it violates Rule C6, and it just tells the plot. Every creative work has a hooky plot. You could shorten ALT0, or pipe the link in ALT1 as follows:- ALT1a: ... that Sarazanmai was conceived as a series about supernatural monsters for an adult audience?
- Or you could suggest something else. Thanks, Yoninah (talk) 22:56, 28 November 2019 (UTC)
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Thanks. Template:Ping did your review cover ALT1? Yoninah (talk) 23:40, 28 November 2019 (UTC)