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:* First, it's not that interesting since many vegan athletes will make similar claims. Second, it's better if the hook doesn't seem to be promoting something (in this case veganism). ([[User talk:Buidhe|t]] &#183; [[Special:Contributions/Buidhe|c]]) '''[[User:buidhe|<span style="color: black">buidhe</span>]]''' 10:28, 3 November 2020 (UTC)
 
:* First, it's not that interesting since many vegan athletes will make similar claims. Second, it's better if the hook doesn't seem to be promoting something (in this case veganism). ([[User talk:Buidhe|t]] &#183; [[Special:Contributions/Buidhe|c]]) '''[[User:buidhe|<span style="color: black">buidhe</span>]]''' 10:28, 3 November 2020 (UTC)
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:* Seeing a comment was made on 3 November but not a full review, I will conduct a full review (though I agree with {{U|Buidhe}}'s comments about the hook)
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:* [[File:Yes check.svg|20px|link=|alt={{#if:|{{{alt}}}|check}}]]<span style="display:none">Y</span><!--template:tick--> Article is long enough (7259 characters), is a GA, nominated in time (became GA on 1 November, nominated on 2 November), and article is within policy
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:* [[File:X mark.svg|20px|link=|alt=&#9746;]]<span style="display:none">N</span><!--template:cross--> As highlighted above, a hook that a vegan thinks veganism has helped them is uninteresting, as it's very common for vegans to post support for veganism. Please can you provide a more interesting hook?
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:* [[File:Yes check.svg|20px|link=|alt={{#if:|{{{alt}}}|check}}]]<span style="display:none">Y</span><!--template:tick--> QPQ done
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:* [[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]] {{U|EchetusXe}} Overall, the article is good (no pun intended!), but the hook is not. [[User:Joseph2302|<b style="color:#0033ab">Joseph</b>]][[User talk:Joseph2302|<b style="color:#000000">2302</b>]] ([[User talk:Joseph2302|talk)]] 10:27, 21 November 2020 (UTC)
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Revision as of 10:27, 21 November 2020

Shaun Brisley

Improved to Good Article status by EchetusXe (talk). Self-nominated at 15:42, 2 November 2020 (UTC).

  • First, it's not that interesting since many vegan athletes will make similar claims. Second, it's better if the hook doesn't seem to be promoting something (in this case veganism). (t · c) buidhe 10:28, 3 November 2020 (UTC)
  • Seeing a comment was made on 3 November but not a full review, I will conduct a full review (though I agree with Template:U's comments about the hook)
  • checkY Article is long enough (7259 characters), is a GA, nominated in time (became GA on 1 November, nominated on 2 November), and article is within policy
  • ☒N As highlighted above, a hook that a vegan thinks veganism has helped them is uninteresting, as it's very common for vegans to post support for veganism. Please can you provide a more interesting hook?
  • checkY QPQ done
  • Symbol question.svg Template:U Overall, the article is good (no pun intended!), but the hook is not. Joseph2302 (talk) 10:27, 21 November 2020 (UTC)