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:* [[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]] {{U|EchetusXe}} Overall, the article is good (no pun intended!), but the hook is not. [[User:Joseph2302|<b style="color:#0033ab">Joseph</b>]][[User talk:Joseph2302|<b style="color:#000000">2302</b>]] ([[User talk:Joseph2302|talk)]] 10:27, 21 November 2020 (UTC)
 
:* [[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]] {{U|EchetusXe}} Overall, the article is good (no pun intended!), but the hook is not. [[User:Joseph2302|<b style="color:#0033ab">Joseph</b>]][[User talk:Joseph2302|<b style="color:#000000">2302</b>]] ([[User talk:Joseph2302|talk)]] 10:27, 21 November 2020 (UTC)
 
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::I have to say that there aren't many vegan footballers. How about we just change the hook to state that he became vegan and not mention the fitness quote?[[User:EchetusXe|Echetus]][[User talk:EchetusXe|'''X'''e]] 13:31, 21 November 2020 (UTC)
  
  
 
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Revision as of 13:31, 21 November 2020

Shaun Brisley

Improved to Good Article status by EchetusXe (talk). Self-nominated at 15:42, 2 November 2020 (UTC).

  • First, it's not that interesting since many vegan athletes will make similar claims. Second, it's better if the hook doesn't seem to be promoting something (in this case veganism). (t · c) buidhe 10:28, 3 November 2020 (UTC)
  • Seeing a comment was made on 3 November but not a full review, I will conduct a full review (though I agree with Template:U's comments about the hook)
  • checkY Article is long enough (7259 characters), is a GA, nominated in time (became GA on 1 November, nominated on 2 November), and article is within policy
  • ☒N As highlighted above, a hook that a vegan thinks veganism has helped them is uninteresting, as it's very common for vegans to post support for veganism. Please can you provide a more interesting hook?
  • checkY QPQ done
  • Symbol question.svg Template:U Overall, the article is good (no pun intended!), but the hook is not. Joseph2302 (talk) 10:27, 21 November 2020 (UTC)
I have to say that there aren't many vegan footballers. How about we just change the hook to state that he became vegan and not mention the fitness quote?EchetusXe 13:31, 21 November 2020 (UTC)