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The result was: '''promoted''' by [[User:SL93|SL93]] ([[User talk:SL93|talk]]) 06:37, 5 June 2017 (UTC)<br />
 
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* ... that after the [[Bhikkhuni|Buddhist nun]] '''[[Shinnyo]]''' was chosen to restore the [[Chūgū-ji]] nunnery, she downplayed the contribution of the priests who selected her?  <br><small>Source: "Eison ... agreed to help with the revival of Chūgūji, and decided to appoint the nun Shinnyo ... as its rector" "She [Shinnyo] portrays herself as the sole force behind Chūgūji's revival" both in [https://books.google.co.uk/books?id=B4fARMdQkXUC&pg=PA293&redir_esc=y#v=onepage&q=ganmon&f=false Meeks pp. 293-294].</small>
 
* ... that after the [[Bhikkhuni|Buddhist nun]] '''[[Shinnyo]]''' was chosen to restore the [[Chūgū-ji]] nunnery, she downplayed the contribution of the priests who selected her?  <br><small>Source: "Eison ... agreed to help with the revival of Chūgūji, and decided to appoint the nun Shinnyo ... as its rector" "She [Shinnyo] portrays herself as the sole force behind Chūgūji's revival" both in [https://books.google.co.uk/books?id=B4fARMdQkXUC&pg=PA293&redir_esc=y#v=onepage&q=ganmon&f=false Meeks pp. 293-294].</small>
 
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<small>Created by [[User:Yunshui|Yunshui]] ([[User talk:Yunshui|talk]]). Self-nominated at 12:40, 15 May 2017 (UTC).</small>
 
<small>Created by [[User:Yunshui|Yunshui]] ([[User talk:Yunshui|talk]]). Self-nominated at 12:40, 15 May 2017 (UTC).</small>
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:* [[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]] Article is long enough and new enough. Am I blind, or does the "the founder of the Shingon Risshu sect" bit not appear in the sources for the sentence containing it? Didn't notice any plagiarism or copyvio issues when spot-checking, nothing on Copyviotools either. Hook is supported by the article and by the sources, but I wonder if a more interesting take on the story could be found. QPQ is done. And by the way, always glad when editors who took an indefinite leave return. [[User:Jo-Jo Eumerus|Jo-Jo Eumerus]] ([[User talk:Jo-Jo Eumerus|talk]], [[Special:CentralAuth/Jo-Jo Eumerus|contributions]]) 18:51, 16 May 2017 (UTC)
 
:* [[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]] Article is long enough and new enough. Am I blind, or does the "the founder of the Shingon Risshu sect" bit not appear in the sources for the sentence containing it? Didn't notice any plagiarism or copyvio issues when spot-checking, nothing on Copyviotools either. Hook is supported by the article and by the sources, but I wonder if a more interesting take on the story could be found. QPQ is done. And by the way, always glad when editors who took an indefinite leave return. [[User:Jo-Jo Eumerus|Jo-Jo Eumerus]] ([[User talk:Jo-Jo Eumerus|talk]], [[Special:CentralAuth/Jo-Jo Eumerus|contributions]]) 18:51, 16 May 2017 (UTC)
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:::Any better? [[User:Yunshui|Yunshui]]&nbsp;[[User talk:Yunshui|<sup style="font-size:90%">雲</sup>]][[Special:Contributions/Yunshui|<sub style="font-size:90%">水</sub>]] 08:33, 17 May 2017 (UTC)
 
:::Any better? [[User:Yunshui|Yunshui]]&nbsp;[[User talk:Yunshui|<sup style="font-size:90%">雲</sup>]][[Special:Contributions/Yunshui|<sub style="font-size:90%">水</sub>]] 08:33, 17 May 2017 (UTC)
 
::::[[File:Symbol voting keep.svg|16px]] Better, new source checked, may want to link ''bhikkhuni'' in the article as well. [[User:Jo-Jo Eumerus|Jo-Jo Eumerus]] ([[User talk:Jo-Jo Eumerus|talk]], [[Special:CentralAuth/Jo-Jo Eumerus|contributions]]) 16:11, 17 May 2017 (UTC)
 
::::[[File:Symbol voting keep.svg|16px]] Better, new source checked, may want to link ''bhikkhuni'' in the article as well. [[User:Jo-Jo Eumerus|Jo-Jo Eumerus]] ([[User talk:Jo-Jo Eumerus|talk]], [[Special:CentralAuth/Jo-Jo Eumerus|contributions]]) 16:11, 17 May 2017 (UTC)
:::::It's linked in the first paragraph, but is piped to [[Bhikkhuni|Buddhist nun]] for clarity. [[User:Yunshui|Yunshui]]&nbsp;[[User talk:Yunshui|<sup style="font-size:90%">雲</sup>]][[Special:Contributions/Yunshui|<sub style="font-size:90%">水</sub>]] 08:04, 19 May 2017 (UTC)
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:::::It's linked in the first paragraph, but is piped to [[Bhikkhuni|Buddhist nun]] for clarity. [[User:Yunshui|Yunshui]]&nbsp;[[User talk:Yunshui|<sup style="font-size:90%">雲</sup>]][[Special:Contributions/Yunshui|<sub style="font-size:90%">水</sub>]] 08:04, 19 May 2017 (UTC)</div></noinclude><!--Please do not write below this line or remove this line. Place comments above this line.-->
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Latest revision as of 06:37, 5 June 2017

The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by SL93 (talk) 06:37, 5 June 2017 (UTC)

Shinnyo

  • ... that after the Buddhist nun Shinnyo was chosen to restore the Chūgū-ji nunnery, she downplayed the contribution of the priests who selected her?
    Source: "Eison ... agreed to help with the revival of Chūgūji, and decided to appoint the nun Shinnyo ... as its rector" "She [Shinnyo] portrays herself as the sole force behind Chūgūji's revival" both in Meeks pp. 293-294.

Created by Yunshui (talk). Self-nominated at 12:40, 15 May 2017 (UTC).

  • Symbol question.svg Article is long enough and new enough. Am I blind, or does the "the founder of the Shingon Risshu sect" bit not appear in the sources for the sentence containing it? Didn't notice any plagiarism or copyvio issues when spot-checking, nothing on Copyviotools either. Hook is supported by the article and by the sources, but I wonder if a more interesting take on the story could be found. QPQ is done. And by the way, always glad when editors who took an indefinite leave return. Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk, contributions) 18:51, 16 May 2017 (UTC)
Source added for Eison, although his founding of Shingon Risshu is sourced in the linked article about him. As far as alternative hooks go, how about:
ALT1 ..."that Shinnyo was the first fully-ordained bhikkhuni in her order for several hundred years." Source: "... she also succeeded in convincing Kakujo ... to bestow the bikkuni (complete nun's precepts) on her, despite the fact that it had been hundreds of years since the monastic community had made these precepts available to women." Watson, 2013
Any better? Yunshui  08:33, 17 May 2017 (UTC)
Symbol voting keep.svg Better, new source checked, may want to link bhikkhuni in the article as well. Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk, contributions) 16:11, 17 May 2017 (UTC)
It's linked in the first paragraph, but is piped to Buddhist nun for clarity. Yunshui  08:04, 19 May 2017 (UTC)