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:*Thanks for the quick response. All set, just needs your review. [[User:Green Giant|Green Giant]] ([[User talk:Green Giant|talk]]) 07:23, 30 January 2014 (UTC)
 
:*Thanks for the quick response. All set, just needs your review. [[User:Green Giant|Green Giant]] ([[User talk:Green Giant|talk]]) 07:23, 30 January 2014 (UTC)
  
::*Reviewing [[Template:Did you know nominations/Frederick Lukis]].--[[User:TonyTheTiger|TonyTheTiger]] <small>([[User talk:TonyTheTiger|T]] / [[Special:Contributions/TonyTheTiger|C]] / [[WP:FOUR]] / [[WP:CHICAGO]] / [[WP:WAWARD]])</small> 01:26, 1 February 2014 (UTC)
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::*1st QPQ against [[Template:Did you know nominations/Frederick Lukis]].--[[User:TonyTheTiger|TonyTheTiger]] <small>([[User talk:TonyTheTiger|T]] / [[Special:Contributions/TonyTheTiger|C]] / [[WP:FOUR]] / [[WP:CHICAGO]] / [[WP:WAWARD]])</small> 01:26, 1 February 2014 (UTC)
 
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Spike Albrecht

Spike Albrecht

5x expanded by TonyTheTiger (talk). Self nominated at 03:24, 28 January 2014 (UTC).

  • Symbol question.svg Reviewed against the criteria:
  • long enough - 2591 characters (417 words) "readable prose size"
→3564 characters more than meets the requirement.
  • prose only expanded fourfold since expansion began, 652 characters to 2591, but it is a BLP and is now far better sourced
  • Within policy - neutral, cites sources with inline citations, at least one per paragraph, free of close paraphrasing issues, copyright violations and plagiarism
  • Hook is interesting, neutral, 170 characters, and formatted properly, but:
→ it does not have an inline citation in the article.
→ both ALTs are interesting and have excellent citations but I think I'd have to go for ALT1, simply because it is 200 characters and ALT2 is 247.
  • QPQ – waiting for nominator to review another nominee.
  • The infobox image could be used because it is free and shows up well:
  • Grrreat article, just needs a citation for the hook, a QPQ review, and maybe a bit more prose, although I'm willing to accept it as it stands. Green Giant (talk) 04:28, 30 January 2014 (UTC)
  • Thanks for the quick response. All set, just needs your review. Green Giant (talk) 07:23, 30 January 2014 (UTC)