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:* [[File:Symbol confirmed.svg|16px]] I like the first hook (eco-model). The alternate is quirky, but I don't think it's as notable? The sources for the eco-model hook are good. Picture in article is from commons. I don't see any copyright issues. Originally written a while ago, but moved to the main space on May 20, so counts as recent. Looks good to me. Thanks for writing this article! [[User:QuakerSquirrel|QuakerSquirrel]] ([[User talk:QuakerSquirrel|talk]]) 19:18, 23 May 2019 (UTC)
 
:* [[File:Symbol confirmed.svg|16px]] I like the first hook (eco-model). The alternate is quirky, but I don't think it's as notable? The sources for the eco-model hook are good. Picture in article is from commons. I don't see any copyright issues. Originally written a while ago, but moved to the main space on May 20, so counts as recent. Looks good to me. Thanks for writing this article! [[User:QuakerSquirrel|QuakerSquirrel]] ([[User talk:QuakerSquirrel|talk]]) 19:18, 23 May 2019 (UTC)
 
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::*[[File:Symbol question.svg|16px]] Hi, I came by to promote ALT1, but the hook needs a few more words to make it grammatically correct, and then it closely paraphrases the source:
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::*'''ALT0a''': ... that '''[[Summer Rayne Oakes]]''' became known as "the world's first [[Ecology movement|eco]]-model" because she only models clothes made from organic or recycled materials?
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::*Here's the source:
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::*''Oakes only models clothing made from organic or recycled materials.'' [[User:Yoninah|Yoninah]] ([[User talk:Yoninah|talk]]) 22:56, 20 June 2019 (UTC)
 
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Revision as of 22:56, 20 June 2019

Summer Rayne Oakes

Summer Rayne Oakes in 2018
Summer Rayne Oakes in 2018
  • Reviewed: InvisiblePeople.tv
  • Comment: If I didn't have a length shortage, I'd combine the two hooks. Or more: Summer Rayne is her real name; she lives with a chicken that she takes on the New York City subway to modeling assignments... No shortage of "hooks" for this article!

Moved to mainspace by GRuban (talk). Self-nominated at 19:35, 21 May 2019 (UTC).

  • Symbol confirmed.svg I like the first hook (eco-model). The alternate is quirky, but I don't think it's as notable? The sources for the eco-model hook are good. Picture in article is from commons. I don't see any copyright issues. Originally written a while ago, but moved to the main space on May 20, so counts as recent. Looks good to me. Thanks for writing this article! QuakerSquirrel (talk) 19:18, 23 May 2019 (UTC)
  • Symbol question.svg Hi, I came by to promote ALT1, but the hook needs a few more words to make it grammatically correct, and then it closely paraphrases the source:
  • ALT0a: ... that Summer Rayne Oakes became known as "the world's first eco-model" because she only models clothes made from organic or recycled materials?
  • Here's the source:
  • Oakes only models clothing made from organic or recycled materials. Yoninah (talk) 22:56, 20 June 2019 (UTC)