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TWG Tea
... that the Singapore-based TWG Tea is described as the "world's finest luxury tea brand"?
Created by Bonkers The Clown (talk). Self nominated at 06:29, 28 July 2013 (UTC).
You should include links to this article in other related articles; currently there is none. The proposed hook sounds a bit promotional. Cambalachero (talk) 02:21, 29 July 2013 (UTC)
- I also dont like this hook, not for being promotional, but for being some news reporter's opinion. Maybe something based on 1837 can be framed. §§Dharmadhyaksha§§ {T/C} 04:30, 29 July 2013 (UTC)
- There's a joker removing the negative aspects of the company (the lawsuits) and turning the article into an advertisement. ☯ Bonkers The Clown \(^_^)/ Nonsensical Babble ☯ 08:38, 29 July 2013 (UTC)
- ALT1: ... that while the year 1837 is inscribed on TWG TeaTemplate:`s logo, it was founded in 2008? ☯ Bonkers The Clown \(^_^)/ Nonsensical Babble ☯ 12:47, 29 July 2013 (UTC)
The second hook is acceptable Cambalachero (talk) 16:53, 1 August 2013 (UTC)
- ALT1: ... that while the year 1837 is inscribed on TWG TeaTemplate:`s logo, it was founded in 2008? ☯ Bonkers The Clown \(^_^)/ Nonsensical Babble ☯ 12:47, 29 July 2013 (UTC)
- There's a joker removing the negative aspects of the company (the lawsuits) and turning the article into an advertisement. ☯ Bonkers The Clown \(^_^)/ Nonsensical Babble ☯ 08:38, 29 July 2013 (UTC)
- I also dont like this hook, not for being promotional, but for being some news reporter's opinion. Maybe something based on 1837 can be framed. §§Dharmadhyaksha§§ {T/C} 04:30, 29 July 2013 (UTC)