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::::'''ALT1''' ... that a 2016 song by '''[[Taiiku Okazaki]]''' became a viral hit in Japan for parodying commonly-used tropes in Japanese [[music video]]s? | ::::'''ALT1''' ... that a 2016 song by '''[[Taiiku Okazaki]]''' became a viral hit in Japan for parodying commonly-used tropes in Japanese [[music video]]s? | ||
− | :::[[User:Narutolovehinata5|Narutolovehinata5]] <sup>[[User talk:Narutolovehinata5|t]][[Special:Contributions/Narutolovehinata5|c]][[WP:CSD|csd]][[Special:Newpages|new]]</sup> 23:31, 13 March 2019 (UTC) | + | ::::[[User:Narutolovehinata5|Narutolovehinata5]] <sup>[[User talk:Narutolovehinata5|t]][[Special:Contributions/Narutolovehinata5|c]][[WP:CSD|csd]][[Special:Newpages|new]]</sup> 23:31, 13 March 2019 (UTC) |
+ | :::::*{{ping|Narutolovehinata5}} I suggest tweaking it a bit more: | ||
+ | :::::*'''ALT1a''': ... that a 2016 song by '''[[Taiiku Okazaki]]''' went viral as it parodied commonly-used tropes in Japanese [[music video]]s? [[User:Yoninah|Yoninah]] ([[User talk:Yoninah|talk]]) 22:08, 14 March 2019 (UTC) | ||
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Taiiku Okazaki
- ... that Taiiku Okazaki parodied tropes used in Japanese music videos in a song titled "Music Video"? Source: [1], [2]
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Reborn as a Vending Machine, I Now Wander the Dungeon
- Comment: He will be making a guest appearance in the Pokémon Sun & Moon anime on March 31, so I'm requesting that this go up on that date. Special thanks to Template:U who helped out with the precise hook wording on Discord.
Created by Narutolovehinata5 (talk). Self-nominated at 03:05, 13 March 2019 (UTC).
New enough, long enough, neutrally written, well referenced, no close paraphrasing seen. Hook ref verified and cited inline. QPQ done. However, I think you should try to avoid the repetition in the hook by not naming the song; perhaps you could add a different detail like the fact that it became a viral hit. Yoninah (talk) 22:50, 13 March 2019 (UTC)
- Template:Ping What about:
- ALT1 ... that a 2016 song by Taiiku Okazaki became a viral hit in Japan for parodying commonly-used tropes in Japanese music videos?
- Narutolovehinata5 tccsdnew 23:31, 13 March 2019 (UTC)
- Template:Ping I suggest tweaking it a bit more:
- ALT1a: ... that a 2016 song by Taiiku Okazaki went viral as it parodied commonly-used tropes in Japanese music videos? Yoninah (talk) 22:08, 14 March 2019 (UTC)
- Template:Ping What about: